for Talking through the differences11/10/2017 c1 IronDog
This made me chuckle. Despite marked differences between my sex life and theirs, and personal disagreements with some of the opinions, this felt brilliantly fresh and real. You're also a decent writer and it makes a pleasant change
This made me chuckle. Despite marked differences between my sex life and theirs, and personal disagreements with some of the opinions, this felt brilliantly fresh and real. You're also a decent writer and it makes a pleasant change
6/23/2013 c1 
1misspelledideas
Cory's right. Romance novels are full of shit. This story was amazing, and incredibly realistic. Props to you.
1misspelledideasCory's right. Romance novels are full of shit. This story was amazing, and incredibly realistic. Props to you.
2/28/2013 c1 Radio
This was great, I so agree with Cory. I remember when I was younger and I'd read those trashy romance novels and think "YES, this is how it should be." and now much older and much wiser I know that if it's not like a romance novel it doesn't mean it's not still really good. Thanks for the walk down memory lane and maybe a few chuckles.
This was great, I so agree with Cory. I remember when I was younger and I'd read those trashy romance novels and think "YES, this is how it should be." and now much older and much wiser I know that if it's not like a romance novel it doesn't mean it's not still really good. Thanks for the walk down memory lane and maybe a few chuckles.
4/3/2012 c1 LeKo
Very funny story, realistic too. I like it a lot. I like how they negotiate. Not that that is always realistic, but who cares. Funny and sweet. Nice.
Very funny story, realistic too. I like it a lot. I like how they negotiate. Not that that is always realistic, but who cares. Funny and sweet. Nice.
2/27/2012 c1 xfffxfxfx
This story is pretty interesting, but I can't help but feel it would have been better as part of a larger story. The whole expectations vs. experience scheme would have been fascinating for a novella, encompassing all aspects of life, not just the sexual.
But I do appreciate the way you tell a story in a non-linear way, jumping around and back and forth based on the theme.
This story is pretty interesting, but I can't help but feel it would have been better as part of a larger story. The whole expectations vs. experience scheme would have been fascinating for a novella, encompassing all aspects of life, not just the sexual.
But I do appreciate the way you tell a story in a non-linear way, jumping around and back and forth based on the theme.
1/7/2012 c1 Spaz
That was kind of adorable.
That was kind of adorable.
12/24/2011 c1 1Scorned
:3, this whole time I waS IMAGINING MY MOM'S ROMANCE NOVELS (tHE ONES WITH fABIO AND SOME BUSTY CHICK ON THE COVER)
Sorry about the caps lock. I put it on by accident and didn't have the energy to fix it.
I think you achieved an incongruity, and in a realistic way as well. This story just had a certain 'flow' to it that made everything sort of work, you know?
Happy Holiday swag~
1Scorned:3, this whole time I waS IMAGINING MY MOM'S ROMANCE NOVELS (tHE ONES WITH fABIO AND SOME BUSTY CHICK ON THE COVER)
Sorry about the caps lock. I put it on by accident and didn't have the energy to fix it.
I think you achieved an incongruity, and in a realistic way as well. This story just had a certain 'flow' to it that made everything sort of work, you know?
Happy Holiday swag~