for Halo meets Superstar12/21/2011 c2 
3J.Renea
Ok so first let me say that I really like Halo's name. It's unique. Secondly, I.think the tidbit about you feeling random when you wrote the chapter really helps to explain the writing style as well as the content of the chapter, it was all a bit random. I do like the contrast between Halo's friends, making her the linking factor between the two. All in all, I would say that the style of storytelling is different from what I'm used to, but it was interesting to read. I am interested in seeing how the story develops though, without the random outbursts.
3J.ReneaOk so first let me say that I really like Halo's name. It's unique. Secondly, I.think the tidbit about you feeling random when you wrote the chapter really helps to explain the writing style as well as the content of the chapter, it was all a bit random. I do like the contrast between Halo's friends, making her the linking factor between the two. All in all, I would say that the style of storytelling is different from what I'm used to, but it was interesting to read. I am interested in seeing how the story develops though, without the random outbursts.