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2/13/2014 c1 ProjectPhoenix2014
Overall I found your story great! :D there were a few minor mistakes and when Nemesis talks, you should put his words in different writing or in quotation marks so you don't confuse anyone :))) so excited to hear more so please keep writing!

I'd love to hear about your ideas of how to write such interesting stories so please come read my first chapter of Project Phoenix and please give me an idea whether or not I'm on the right track ? Thank you for such a good read :)

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