
2/2/2012 c1 Snehal
Beautiful indeed to the point I could recollect some past moments. As usual this piece talks about human tendency. Modern lifestyle has it's own shortcomings as well. Casually stated in the end hints at a carefree approach as to being forgotten. . :) striking and forceful message. i just had one suggestion. Could you just expand it a trifle bit? How love transforms from promises of yore to present day preening?
Beautiful indeed to the point I could recollect some past moments. As usual this piece talks about human tendency. Modern lifestyle has it's own shortcomings as well. Casually stated in the end hints at a carefree approach as to being forgotten. . :) striking and forceful message. i just had one suggestion. Could you just expand it a trifle bit? How love transforms from promises of yore to present day preening?