for Skiing and Other Misdirections12/4/2020 c2 Liane Kennedy
Wish this story was longer! Thanks!
Wish this story was longer! Thanks!
8/31/2019 c2 Shailaputri
I read this story days before..came back to comment it..It is really sweet story which is worthy reading. Him telling that boy likes girl and does nothing to get her is wrong..nicely put. You kind of capture the human internal feelings and adding humor tone..excellent.
I read this story days before..came back to comment it..It is really sweet story which is worthy reading. Him telling that boy likes girl and does nothing to get her is wrong..nicely put. You kind of capture the human internal feelings and adding humor tone..excellent.
6/5/2019 c1 
2stunningaurora
(think of this review as the one for chapter 2, sorry!) ahhhh! this is really good, just like the other oneshots you wrote! i love your style of writing!
2stunningaurora(think of this review as the one for chapter 2, sorry!) ahhhh! this is really good, just like the other oneshots you wrote! i love your style of writing!
6/5/2019 c2 stunningaurora
i really do hope that you're not abandoning this story, cause it's a really good plot, with a chance that i would never miss out on! hopefully you'll update soon cause i would love to see this story keep on growing!
i really do hope that you're not abandoning this story, cause it's a really good plot, with a chance that i would never miss out on! hopefully you'll update soon cause i would love to see this story keep on growing!
5/18/2016 c2 3Colie Rae
This was a cute story! I liked the casual nature of the building relationship. The characters were believable and it was fun.
3Colie RaeThis was a cute story! I liked the casual nature of the building relationship. The characters were believable and it was fun.
7/28/2015 c2 DragonOwl
I'm so happy I got to read this! I've clicked on the description before hoping to read this oneshot and was disappointed to hear that it had been taken off, but I understand your reasoning for it. Thank you for re posting it - it was such an enjoyable read and I loved the characters :D
I'm so happy I got to read this! I've clicked on the description before hoping to read this oneshot and was disappointed to hear that it had been taken off, but I understand your reasoning for it. Thank you for re posting it - it was such an enjoyable read and I loved the characters :D
3/31/2015 c2 Red
Their relationship seemed kind of rushed to me, but not to the point that I hated the story. Quite the contrary, actually. Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it! xx
Their relationship seemed kind of rushed to me, but not to the point that I hated the story. Quite the contrary, actually. Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it! xx
10/16/2014 c2 75AlysonSerenaStone
I've been wanting to read your stories for awhile now and was so happy to see that you posted some. This was a very good read! It was funny, even though it's based on a horrible experience. Great work!
75AlysonSerenaStoneI've been wanting to read your stories for awhile now and was so happy to see that you posted some. This was a very good read! It was funny, even though it's based on a horrible experience. Great work!
8/14/2014 c2 Guest
HeyoMyFellowReaders101: This story is so cute. I like it! A lot. Thank you for sharing!
HeyoMyFellowReaders101: This story is so cute. I like it! A lot. Thank you for sharing!
3/29/2013 c1 Guest
i thought she wanted a hot chocolate, not a coffee?
anyway, great story:)
i thought she wanted a hot chocolate, not a coffee?
anyway, great story:)
2/27/2013 c1 Kirsty
Not a hot chocolate after all then? Cute, I liked it!
Not a hot chocolate after all then? Cute, I liked it!
2/22/2013 c1 Gogorocketgo
Lol! After reading the beginning of this, I felt as though you go skiing, a lot. Then your message at the end sealed the deal.
Very well written, complete, clear ideas. Was visual without being long winded. Good job!
Lol! After reading the beginning of this, I felt as though you go skiing, a lot. Then your message at the end sealed the deal.
Very well written, complete, clear ideas. Was visual without being long winded. Good job!