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3/22/2016 c23 1thejadem
loved this story so much! you made me LOVE the characters and I'm sad to see them 'go'. You are such a good writer! I think this could totally be published! Again! LOVE LOVE LOVE it and all of your work i've read.
12/5/2015 c23 1somersaultkick
Amazing.. though there is only a little conflict and less drama. But it's fine! We don't want problems in real life.
4/18/2015 c23 Sandman
Great story! I enjoyed reading it heaps. Thank you and keep writing!
4/1/2015 c23 MiranDuranDa
I liked the story, but it seemed like a very abrupt ending. I get that there probably wasn't much more to say, it just seemed like ch22 was in the middle of a story and then all the sudden 23 was an epilogue. Not sure what was missin though. I guess the conflict was just more subtle, so it didn't make as much of a climax, like a more emotional scene where Rory admits he really has a problem or Deacon is abused by his dad and comes to terms with the fact that he really is in an abusive family. Without something to come down from, it seemed abrupt.
3/29/2015 c23 alwaysheinous
I just read this entire thing in one sitting... loved every second. Their relationship is so sweet and caring and just the whole thing in general was very well written! I felt like I could really get into Rory's head. Seriously, I can't tell you what an amazing read this was. Kudos!
3/24/2015 c23 9Storm Cycle
Rory's tendencies seem to me that he has Aspergers. Could you tell me if he does or not? I loved the story, by the way.
3/17/2015 c23 2A.A.Spears
Amazing story! Loved every minute of it!
3/17/2015 c11 A.A.Spears
This character is so original. I love it!
3/14/2015 c23 5ramblingrobin
Fun chapter! Nicely done.
3/5/2015 c23 Krlsen
:)
3/5/2015 c23 16DevilDragon of Pain
A great read as always. Love the time jump. It really worked well.
3/5/2015 c23 Dawrey
Awww, Rory is all grown up, how cute. That scene in the end, I love how you made it really got while still keeping that Rory ocd that defines him so well. Can't wait for the next update!
1/25/2015 c22 Ancornothing
Ha! I just read your story in one go and let me tell you I loved it. When I started the story I was hoping Deacon wouldn't turn out to be an asshole in every way. I was pleasantly surprised to fall in love with him the more the chapter went on :) The only part where I was a little thrown was that night they had sex, but I'm glad he and Rory sorted that out and he apologized.

Rory was simply adorable through and through though. It was hilarious to read his views on everything especially on love. He's so pragmatic about sex and love, you can't help but laugh. But it's adorable he opened himself little by little to Deacon. I really love the way you showed Rory change little by little and fight his OCD. I also loved how near the end, you can see how much Rory cared for Deacon when no matter what he does or where he is, he always has to mention Deacon.

I really like Rory's mom and his sister. I like that his sister, despite being hurt never took it out on Rory and instead kept caring about him. Even when she wasn't happy with the situation, she kept to herself instead of harassing Rory and Deacon. I would love to see some bits about her and her new boyfriend in the epilogue as well as much more of Rory and Deacon in college.

Love your writing. It's witty and has a very nice flow to it. I'm going to check out your other stories. Thank you for such a lovely read.
12/25/2014 c22 Krlsen
:)
12/24/2014 c22 tyves986
So I finished this, and as I was in bed thinking about it, I was like that was a good and it should really just end like that. I log on and it says completed (though when I read it I didn't realize it was the last chapter). If you write an epilogue I want to see Rory sending Deacon off to College or maybe Deacon visiting Rory next Christmas, Deacon being jealous (when Rory joins the swim team and meets a guy and becomes friends) or when Rory is going off to college. I am not sure why I find Rory so likeable, but its probably the way his logic works. Anyways I loved it. Happy Holidays!
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