for Top Secret: For Alien Eyes Only3/27/2012 c4 Damien
Gah. This story lacks content and writing. Forgetting the fact it's only four chapters. I expected more to be frank. Sounds like another cliche romance story written by someone who hasn't tried to forward their talent and hone their skills. Oooh, aliens. Really? Try to make your character less Mary-Sue and try to stand out hun.
Out of 10, I'd probably give this a 3.
Gah. This story lacks content and writing. Forgetting the fact it's only four chapters. I expected more to be frank. Sounds like another cliche romance story written by someone who hasn't tried to forward their talent and hone their skills. Oooh, aliens. Really? Try to make your character less Mary-Sue and try to stand out hun.
Out of 10, I'd probably give this a 3.
3/23/2012 c3 
4Suppy
Interesting... not sure how I feel about the story yet, but it was definitely intriguing enough for a read! It's a cool concept you have, maybe the back story will be explained later? I'd really like to know. Anyhow, pretty nice job!
All the best xx
4SuppyInteresting... not sure how I feel about the story yet, but it was definitely intriguing enough for a read! It's a cool concept you have, maybe the back story will be explained later? I'd really like to know. Anyhow, pretty nice job!
All the best xx
2/19/2012 c2 1PunkWolf83
Hey! got your pm today! Glad I made your day! I do really like your story though, and when I saw it hadn't been reviwed I was like "Oh, crap if I don't do it there might not be another chapter!" Then I went and reviwed cause most of the time I'm just too plain lazy.
Anywho, this chapter was intresting. I 'm getting the feeling that her mom is immune to the memory erasing thing, cause I mean why wouldn't she flip out abot the gun? I mean seriously! Can't wait to see an atual mission though! Hint hint nudge nudge. Till then adieu
1PunkWolf83Hey! got your pm today! Glad I made your day! I do really like your story though, and when I saw it hadn't been reviwed I was like "Oh, crap if I don't do it there might not be another chapter!" Then I went and reviwed cause most of the time I'm just too plain lazy.
Anywho, this chapter was intresting. I 'm getting the feeling that her mom is immune to the memory erasing thing, cause I mean why wouldn't she flip out abot the gun? I mean seriously! Can't wait to see an atual mission though! Hint hint nudge nudge. Till then adieu
1/11/2012 c1 PunkWolf83
Hey! That was friggen hilarious! Your summary didn't reallymatch, but it sounded cool so I'm expecting a lot out of you!
Hey! That was friggen hilarious! Your summary didn't reallymatch, but it sounded cool so I'm expecting a lot out of you!