for Broken5/25/2015 c14 Ibecrazy98
Why did you stop rewriting this amazing story! I love it so much but you stopped writing! Why?! Please update!
Why did you stop rewriting this amazing story! I love it so much but you stopped writing! Why?! Please update!
3/28/2014 c14 GuestThing
Oh my god. Why did you have to disappear after that chapter! This story is amazing. Please bring it back! -flails miserably-
Oh my god. Why did you have to disappear after that chapter! This story is amazing. Please bring it back! -flails miserably-
5/30/2013 c14 MrsMoistner
An Amazing story. Even though I read the other one I feel like these are completely different characters. And they are they just share names and a few features. Please post the next Chapter. I am not one to read unfinished works but this one was just so enticing I couldnt stop. Thanks for writing this much I cant wait for more.
An Amazing story. Even though I read the other one I feel like these are completely different characters. And they are they just share names and a few features. Please post the next Chapter. I am not one to read unfinished works but this one was just so enticing I couldnt stop. Thanks for writing this much I cant wait for more.
8/31/2012 c14 Junoesque
My heart has been beating rapidly for the last twenty minutes as I read chapter 13 and 14. Incredible tension between Matt and Kris. You bring the story to life.
I really liked that it was Tracey who went out to find Kris. I expected Matt, of course, and you surprised me. I love that.
Please, continue. This story makes me want to write again. Thank you. :)
My heart has been beating rapidly for the last twenty minutes as I read chapter 13 and 14. Incredible tension between Matt and Kris. You bring the story to life.
I really liked that it was Tracey who went out to find Kris. I expected Matt, of course, and you surprised me. I love that.
Please, continue. This story makes me want to write again. Thank you. :)
8/20/2012 c1 Kt
Please please update! Such a terrific plot, and you have a gift for character development.
Please please update! Such a terrific plot, and you have a gift for character development.
4/24/2012 c10 
1time flies
I just read every chapter so far tonight. I absolutely love it. Usually I'm wary of horse stories because they often get blow out of reality. You really know your horses.
The story also reads very well. Another review was right when they said that it is the quality you would find on a bookshelf in a store.
Absolutely fantastic, keep it up, and I'll be keeping my eye out for new chapters :)
1time fliesI just read every chapter so far tonight. I absolutely love it. Usually I'm wary of horse stories because they often get blow out of reality. You really know your horses.
The story also reads very well. Another review was right when they said that it is the quality you would find on a bookshelf in a store.
Absolutely fantastic, keep it up, and I'll be keeping my eye out for new chapters :)
3/15/2012 c10 Australia
It was really great 😄 I think it was a lot less bumby this time around I think you starting to get the hang of it😝
It was really great 😄 I think it was a lot less bumby this time around I think you starting to get the hang of it😝
3/13/2012 c9 in.needofa.name
This is an absolutely gorgeous story.
I'm sort of at a loss of words.
Truthfully, I teared up many times because you pegged the emotions that Kris is feeling, and illustrated them so powerfully. I honestly would be shocked if you were to say you have never witnessed/experienced abuse because you really do an excellent job at portraying such an issue.
I could go on but really all I have is praise and don't want to sound like an overzealous fangirl (even though I am lol).
Anyhow, I hope you continue on with this story because I am in complete love with it :)
This is an absolutely gorgeous story.
I'm sort of at a loss of words.
Truthfully, I teared up many times because you pegged the emotions that Kris is feeling, and illustrated them so powerfully. I honestly would be shocked if you were to say you have never witnessed/experienced abuse because you really do an excellent job at portraying such an issue.
I could go on but really all I have is praise and don't want to sound like an overzealous fangirl (even though I am lol).
Anyhow, I hope you continue on with this story because I am in complete love with it :)
2/24/2012 c9 Australia
Im so glad i finished all those exams and quizzes three years ago lol
I think the amount of detail your story is great (perfect), but I think the story is a bit bumpy(?) like its not flowing in one story but in little sections(?)...I don't know lol it was great to read, update when you can :D (soon ;P)
Im so glad i finished all those exams and quizzes three years ago lol
I think the amount of detail your story is great (perfect), but I think the story is a bit bumpy(?) like its not flowing in one story but in little sections(?)...I don't know lol it was great to read, update when you can :D (soon ;P)
2/24/2012 c9 Buhbyesuckers
:$ hehe...errr didn't know my review entertained you but well thanks! :D
Aww you don't have to feel guilty...clearly you're busy with assignments and stuff :( *glares at teachers* but yeah I can wait every week for a new chapter *itches to grab her gun to shoot katie's teachers* AHEM!
I checked out Broken original and I clearly this version is waayyyy better then the first time you wrote it, if you don't mind me saying :S.
This new re-edited version seems...like one of those published stories you see on the shelfs, which is basically is a big hint of a compliment! :D
Can't wait for next week! Bring it on! ;D
:$ hehe...errr didn't know my review entertained you but well thanks! :D
Aww you don't have to feel guilty...clearly you're busy with assignments and stuff :( *glares at teachers* but yeah I can wait every week for a new chapter *itches to grab her gun to shoot katie's teachers* AHEM!
I checked out Broken original and I clearly this version is waayyyy better then the first time you wrote it, if you don't mind me saying :S.
This new re-edited version seems...like one of those published stories you see on the shelfs, which is basically is a big hint of a compliment! :D
Can't wait for next week! Bring it on! ;D
2/21/2012 c8 Buhbyesuckers
I...love...thhhiiiis. STORY! :D :D :D
OMG! OMG! OMG!
I came across this and i just have to know one thing...
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE AGAIN? *jumps up and down in excitement*
*blushes, seeing the looks she gets and slowly backs herself next to the plant pot, standing next to the door*
Erm...ahem yes. Brilliant story, brilliant imagination of what's going on. I can so see it like a film in my head and uhm...
what exactly is your update schedule? :) coz this is a story I want to read the next chapter pretty quickly! ;) :D
Keep it up! :D
I...love...thhhiiiis. STORY! :D :D :D
OMG! OMG! OMG!
I came across this and i just have to know one thing...
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE AGAIN? *jumps up and down in excitement*
*blushes, seeing the looks she gets and slowly backs herself next to the plant pot, standing next to the door*
Erm...ahem yes. Brilliant story, brilliant imagination of what's going on. I can so see it like a film in my head and uhm...
what exactly is your update schedule? :) coz this is a story I want to read the next chapter pretty quickly! ;) :D
Keep it up! :D