for You Can't Have Both: Ellie's Story1/26/2012 c6 
2KoriNeko18
Ah, I love T.J.! He sounds awesome. Peter is getting on my nerves, xD. And I like Ellie alot.
I can't wait for the next chapter! I really wanna see the meeting! :D
2KoriNeko18Ah, I love T.J.! He sounds awesome. Peter is getting on my nerves, xD. And I like Ellie alot.
I can't wait for the next chapter! I really wanna see the meeting! :D
1/26/2012 c6 3AnimeFann88
Aw, TJ sounds nice. I dunno how this story will play out, lol, so please update soon! Great job! :)
3AnimeFann88Aw, TJ sounds nice. I dunno how this story will play out, lol, so please update soon! Great job! :)
1/26/2012 c6 4LadyMoonFace
I love it!
I seriously do! :D
I wish i was finished though!
Through it was I was thinking what could happen! What is gonna happen at the end! then it stopped! D:
I hope you finish it, I really want to know what happens!
Keep up the great work!
4LadyMoonFaceI love it!
I seriously do! :D
I wish i was finished though!
Through it was I was thinking what could happen! What is gonna happen at the end! then it stopped! D:
I hope you finish it, I really want to know what happens!
Keep up the great work!
1/25/2012 c6 Sera
Addicting. I can't wait for the the next update. But Ellie kind of frustrates me. I mean, she's so hung over Peter to a point that when it comes to other people like T.J., she barely has any second thoughts and ends up hurting them. I LOVE the protagonist, and I LOVE the whole "you keep leaving, but why the hell do I still have any feelings for you" theme. But maybe you should milk it. You know, amplify her emotions. That'll be like icing on the cake (haha... see my pun). Hell, you have readers (aka moi) wanting more. Make them beg for more Ellie, almost to a point where we're indulging in her pain and sighing at her naivity.
BUT I LOVE THIS STORY. T.J is a great addition. UPDATE ASAP.
Addicting. I can't wait for the the next update. But Ellie kind of frustrates me. I mean, she's so hung over Peter to a point that when it comes to other people like T.J., she barely has any second thoughts and ends up hurting them. I LOVE the protagonist, and I LOVE the whole "you keep leaving, but why the hell do I still have any feelings for you" theme. But maybe you should milk it. You know, amplify her emotions. That'll be like icing on the cake (haha... see my pun). Hell, you have readers (aka moi) wanting more. Make them beg for more Ellie, almost to a point where we're indulging in her pain and sighing at her naivity.
BUT I LOVE THIS STORY. T.J is a great addition. UPDATE ASAP.
1/25/2012 c6 2aspiringauthor95
Okay so hopefully Peter is coming around:D I'm super excited to see what happens next...although I feel bad for T.J. He seems really nice.
2aspiringauthor95Okay so hopefully Peter is coming around:D I'm super excited to see what happens next...although I feel bad for T.J. He seems really nice.
1/25/2012 c6 Latindancer4ever
Ohh! I wonder what Peter wants. Also, my ex-boyfriends's name is T.J. so it was a little weird reading this chapter. Haha, just thought I'd mention that for the heck of it. Update soon!
Ohh! I wonder what Peter wants. Also, my ex-boyfriends's name is T.J. so it was a little weird reading this chapter. Haha, just thought I'd mention that for the heck of it. Update soon!
1/24/2012 c5 Mildly me
Oh my goodness! This is so heart wrenchingly awesome, yet sad.
Oh my goodness! This is so heart wrenchingly awesome, yet sad.
1/23/2012 c5 3AnimeFann88
AWWW... I know I said I didn't really like Peter, but that's still so sad! :( Great chapter! Update soon please!
3AnimeFann88AWWW... I know I said I didn't really like Peter, but that's still so sad! :( Great chapter! Update soon please!
1/22/2012 c5 Guest
Poor Ellie! I'm not too happy with Peter right now, but I have a feeling he's gonna regret these decisions later on. Big time. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Poor Ellie! I'm not too happy with Peter right now, but I have a feeling he's gonna regret these decisions later on. Big time. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
1/22/2012 c5 2aspiringauthor95
Aahhh! Not how I planned either conversation between Peter and Ellie to go at all! He's coming back right? Please say he's gonna come back for her! That would be awesome! Update puhlease!:3
2aspiringauthor95Aahhh! Not how I planned either conversation between Peter and Ellie to go at all! He's coming back right? Please say he's gonna come back for her! That would be awesome! Update puhlease!:3
1/22/2012 c4 3AnimeFann88
No offense to Peter, but he was being kind of mean to Ellie. I guess that may be just how he is, but still. Anyway, great job! Was the sharp knock on the door Peter? I hope so. Update soon!
3AnimeFann88No offense to Peter, but he was being kind of mean to Ellie. I guess that may be just how he is, but still. Anyway, great job! Was the sharp knock on the door Peter? I hope so. Update soon!
1/22/2012 c4 2KoriNeko18
This is a pretty cool chapter. For some reason, though, random parts of it seemed kind of rushed. It was an awesome chapter though. I love Ellie's cupcakes! They sound so yummy~
2KoriNeko18This is a pretty cool chapter. For some reason, though, random parts of it seemed kind of rushed. It was an awesome chapter though. I love Ellie's cupcakes! They sound so yummy~
1/22/2012 c4 2aspiringauthor95
Oh my gosh! He knows! Now I'm wondering what he's gonna do about it...;) and hopefully I won't have to wait long to find out:D
2aspiringauthor95Oh my gosh! He knows! Now I'm wondering what he's gonna do about it...;) and hopefully I won't have to wait long to find out:D