
1/22/2012 c1
5SherlocktheDebatable
eheeeh love it dude! ...dunno y i was laughing. that is really good. could probably do with a little more detail to extend the process of events happening (as it's all quite quick) unless that's the atmostphere that you wanted to acheive. love the little twist at the end. and no, i'm not one of those lovey dovey people. more chapters?

eheeeh love it dude! ...dunno y i was laughing. that is really good. could probably do with a little more detail to extend the process of events happening (as it's all quite quick) unless that's the atmostphere that you wanted to acheive. love the little twist at the end. and no, i'm not one of those lovey dovey people. more chapters?