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1/22/2012 c1 171theycallmetalljake
Awwww, it's so sweet and blissful. I love the imagery. Reading it is like being in a bubble of serenity. When you mentioned the tangerine ocean, it took me a while to get it, but once I did I was like "OMG! that's GENIUS!" Couldn't have said it better myself. You've done well
1/22/2012 c1 9The Folk Extraction
I couldn't quite think of it as a song when I read it, but I enjoyed reading it as a poem. You have some really beautiful imagery in this. I particularly loved the fourth stanza. I also liked the tangerine ocean bit. It's a very original way to describe a sunset...If that is what it was referring to (?). At any rate, I like it a lot.

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