1/24/2012 c1 Silent Scream
Not easy to figure out, but well written. At first I thought it's about sexual abuse, but the second half makes it seem more like the father is cutting the son or something. Well done!

1/21/2012 c1 66J.M. Black
Very interesting and mysterious. What is exactly happening here? My mind is going in so many different directions with this. Good, quick work though that keeps the reader on edge.

Keep writing!