for Mercenary Fiction4/27/2012 c4 GoodbyeEveryone
A punching bag that can kick your butt must not be a very welcoming especially if your new.
A punching bag that can kick your butt must not be a very welcoming especially if your new.
4/27/2012 c3 GoodbyeEveryone
I like how you can come up with a story for the background of the painting.
I like how you can come up with a story for the background of the painting.
4/4/2012 c7 
1Tomoyuki Tanaka
I thought I should leave a review to let you know I did read this story. And like I told you, I found it awesome. Two thumbs up, ten out of ten, five stars, whatever.
I really should get to writing as well. Ha ha ha ha...how long has it been?
In any case, this story has been epic. Looking forward to writing with you once again. Hey! Whatever happened to Berserk Brothers and the other stories? You removed them! :(
1Tomoyuki TanakaI thought I should leave a review to let you know I did read this story. And like I told you, I found it awesome. Two thumbs up, ten out of ten, five stars, whatever.
I really should get to writing as well. Ha ha ha ha...how long has it been?
In any case, this story has been epic. Looking forward to writing with you once again. Hey! Whatever happened to Berserk Brothers and the other stories? You removed them! :(
3/29/2012 c7 6Van Quatra
i enjoyed this very much, very interesting and pretty funny at certain parts, awesome job.
6Van Quatrai enjoyed this very much, very interesting and pretty funny at certain parts, awesome job.
3/21/2012 c6 Administrator Video
Trayce...
*takes deep breath*
THAT WAS SO FUCKING AWESOME! =D=D=D=D=D
Trayce...
*takes deep breath*
THAT WAS SO FUCKING AWESOME! =D=D=D=D=D
3/21/2012 c6 Leroy L. L
Well this author came for stiff. This chapter we finally get introduced the leader of the Black Roses, and he sure earned his title. The use of Pandora as his almost oversoul, his Kratos like brutality and his i don't a give a damn attitude make Trayce an already enjoyable (and dangerous) character and one befitting a leader. The chapter was a fun ride through a quick fight with Trayce, though he was a rough exterior, the scene of him protecting the family shows he means well enough to be a hero. Great chapter, looking forward to what comes next out of the Black Roses!
Well this author came for stiff. This chapter we finally get introduced the leader of the Black Roses, and he sure earned his title. The use of Pandora as his almost oversoul, his Kratos like brutality and his i don't a give a damn attitude make Trayce an already enjoyable (and dangerous) character and one befitting a leader. The chapter was a fun ride through a quick fight with Trayce, though he was a rough exterior, the scene of him protecting the family shows he means well enough to be a hero. Great chapter, looking forward to what comes next out of the Black Roses!
3/15/2012 c5 Leroy L. L
I liked the character Creed, though I liked the fight and the slice of life for Creed's character I have to say the slice of life parts were more interesting for me. Don't get me wrong, the fight was 2 thumbs way up and only helped the story but the slice of life surrounding it was so good, I helped me enjoy the fight so much more since I felt more attached to Creed's character. Great work! I liked "I wish a bitch would-" and I marked out for the suplexes even the German suplex on the toes! The suplexes added a different fight from what I was used to seeing, and since I always like originality I enjoyed it. Looking forward to the conclusion of the introduction arc soon.
I liked the character Creed, though I liked the fight and the slice of life for Creed's character I have to say the slice of life parts were more interesting for me. Don't get me wrong, the fight was 2 thumbs way up and only helped the story but the slice of life surrounding it was so good, I helped me enjoy the fight so much more since I felt more attached to Creed's character. Great work! I liked "I wish a bitch would-" and I marked out for the suplexes even the German suplex on the toes! The suplexes added a different fight from what I was used to seeing, and since I always like originality I enjoyed it. Looking forward to the conclusion of the introduction arc soon.
3/15/2012 c5 Administrator Video
YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED IT! *glomps*
I couldn't help but lol at most parts xD this was a very interesting chapter! I hope you continue to write more!
Ps: LUCKY you have a degree in writing! D: *totally jealous* xD
YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED IT! *glomps*
I couldn't help but lol at most parts xD this was a very interesting chapter! I hope you continue to write more!
Ps: LUCKY you have a degree in writing! D: *totally jealous* xD
2/13/2012 c4 Administrator Video
Lotus- Wha-? When the hell was I tagged!
Me- *slaps Lotus* Not the time.
Lotus- Wha-? When the hell was I tagged!
Me- *slaps Lotus* Not the time.
2/13/2012 c4 Leroy L. L
Quite epic if I may say so myself. The author of whoever wrote this should proofread more, but the epicness makes up for it.
Quite epic if I may say so myself. The author of whoever wrote this should proofread more, but the epicness makes up for it.
2/8/2012 c3 Administrator Video
I have only one thing to say-
The theme song for this story would definitely be Blow Me Away by Breaking Benjamin. XD epical job!
I have only one thing to say-
The theme song for this story would definitely be Blow Me Away by Breaking Benjamin. XD epical job!
2/8/2012 c3 1valderois
I love every new character that comes into play in this story; Richard's power with his drawing is particularly cool, and Kuok's axe weapon just screams "awesome badass" (and of course there's Kes' introduction into this story too, which was exciting. (^_^)). I really liked the entire concept of the monster within the painting for this chapter too...I guess, in short, I loved the update. Again. But that's to be expected.
1valderoisI love every new character that comes into play in this story; Richard's power with his drawing is particularly cool, and Kuok's axe weapon just screams "awesome badass" (and of course there's Kes' introduction into this story too, which was exciting. (^_^)). I really liked the entire concept of the monster within the painting for this chapter too...I guess, in short, I loved the update. Again. But that's to be expected.