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1/29/2012 c1 31Who Is This Girl Anyway
Hello. :)

Your use of couplets is very good. The use of "end" and "mend" to begin and end the poem gives it a nice, polished sort of end, if that makes sense. You've clearly put a lot of thought into this.

Your vocabulary is brilliant- the speaker comes across as quite well-read. You've also got some lovely imagery in here, which I'd like to see a bit more of. To sum up, this is a really lovely piece and I hope you keep writing poetry.

1/28/2012 c1 True Talker
This is really quite good and it makes one think. Congratulations on writing it, and thank you for sharing it with everyone.

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