for Psychopath1/5/2015 c2 SuddenlySunday
This was shorter than the last chapter, but it was definitely better. The conclusion was awesome and he ended up doing what he was set out to do since the beginning. This story is short but offers a bang when it comes to the ending. I love this short story. It was worth the read.
This was shorter than the last chapter, but it was definitely better. The conclusion was awesome and he ended up doing what he was set out to do since the beginning. This story is short but offers a bang when it comes to the ending. I love this short story. It was worth the read.
1/5/2015 c1 SuddenlySunday
This has a unique format, which makes for a refreshing type of story telling that I don't normally see. It's scary and gripping, and it keeps you on your toes. I think it's great and the chapter is pretty long, too. I want to see more of this.
This has a unique format, which makes for a refreshing type of story telling that I don't normally see. It's scary and gripping, and it keeps you on your toes. I think it's great and the chapter is pretty long, too. I want to see more of this.
1/3/2015 c2 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
A perfect mix of insanity and gore. I absolutely loved it and the creepy and disheartening feel was awesome. This is the perfect horror story.
A perfect mix of insanity and gore. I absolutely loved it and the creepy and disheartening feel was awesome. This is the perfect horror story.
1/3/2015 c1 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
Wow this was gory but I loved the symbolism at the end. That ending line got me. It packed the punch that made this story linger with you and that is awesome.
Wow this was gory but I loved the symbolism at the end. That ending line got me. It packed the punch that made this story linger with you and that is awesome.
4/4/2014 c2 RadicalRadicals777
The end of this was just amazing. I didn't think that he was going to kill her actually. Holy crap this was just amazing! You're an awesome author!
The end of this was just amazing. I didn't think that he was going to kill her actually. Holy crap this was just amazing! You're an awesome author!
4/4/2014 c1 RadicalRadicals777
This is one of the darkest things I've ever read. It's just descriptive and amazing! The ending line put chills down my spone.
This is one of the darkest things I've ever read. It's just descriptive and amazing! The ending line put chills down my spone.
2/24/2014 c2 HFGLF 2
Oh my, this is probably one of the Darkest stories I had ever read!
I applaud you!
Oh my, this is probably one of the Darkest stories I had ever read!
I applaud you!
2/21/2014 c1 HFGLF 2
Rusty? How can you be rusty when you write something so psychologically riveting? This is amazing and violent but in all the right ways! I'm going to read the next chapter!
Rusty? How can you be rusty when you write something so psychologically riveting? This is amazing and violent but in all the right ways! I'm going to read the next chapter!
2/14/2014 c2 King Corn
This story was haunting and wonderful. It's definitely an awesome horror fiction. I love this.
This story was haunting and wonderful. It's definitely an awesome horror fiction. I love this.
2/14/2014 c1 King Corn
Oh my god. This is demented but hell it's so good! Your writing improved by leaps and bounds and I was truly freaked out by this one chapter alone. This is just awesome!
Oh my god. This is demented but hell it's so good! Your writing improved by leaps and bounds and I was truly freaked out by this one chapter alone. This is just awesome!
10/24/2013 c2 Axis Tripper
I like the sense of fulfillment that Siberia had at the end of this, and those closing lines just floored me. Spectacular piece.
I like the sense of fulfillment that Siberia had at the end of this, and those closing lines just floored me. Spectacular piece.
10/24/2013 c1 Axis Tripper
Grim and twisted with a despicable, murderous main character who is out for his own sense of justice and those red, blood, red, blood thoughts make it all the more dank. This is grimly beautiful.
Grim and twisted with a despicable, murderous main character who is out for his own sense of justice and those red, blood, red, blood thoughts make it all the more dank. This is grimly beautiful.
3/19/2013 c2 
1Dark Lord Cthulhu
Man, this was intense and the scene with the heads was just great. Loved this story. It creeped me out in a good way.
1Dark Lord CthulhuMan, this was intense and the scene with the heads was just great. Loved this story. It creeped me out in a good way.
3/19/2013 c1 Dark Lord Cthulhu
This is dark and gruesome. I actually heard about this story from your author's notes on Toxic Butterflies. I must say if it's worse than this, I am in for a true horror. I loved the way this story is constructed. So creepy.
This is dark and gruesome. I actually heard about this story from your author's notes on Toxic Butterflies. I must say if it's worse than this, I am in for a true horror. I loved the way this story is constructed. So creepy.