for The Kingdom of Thunder2/7/2012 c5 
1lobsterwife
Crappppp. It just keeps getting worse, doesn't it? I can't even fathom what else could go wrong at this point (well someone dying is pretty bad, but I don't like thinking about that). I was deeply saddened by the loss of Phinn and Lawson to the team. Like Elena, I'm upset about it, but I guess I understand the reasoning behind the decision (doesn't mean I'm happy about it!). I should have known there'd be Others in the Wheel Room. Nothing can be easy *sigh* Hopefully the gang can get out of this scrape. I kind of love how tying up Phinn is a reoccurring thing. I think it's happened in all four books now haha. Scaling a Kingdom sounds really scary. It makes me faint just thinking about it :/
1lobsterwifeCrappppp. It just keeps getting worse, doesn't it? I can't even fathom what else could go wrong at this point (well someone dying is pretty bad, but I don't like thinking about that). I was deeply saddened by the loss of Phinn and Lawson to the team. Like Elena, I'm upset about it, but I guess I understand the reasoning behind the decision (doesn't mean I'm happy about it!). I should have known there'd be Others in the Wheel Room. Nothing can be easy *sigh* Hopefully the gang can get out of this scrape. I kind of love how tying up Phinn is a reoccurring thing. I think it's happened in all four books now haha. Scaling a Kingdom sounds really scary. It makes me faint just thinking about it :/
2/6/2012 c4 deadgummiegirl
You have no idea how nervous I am for your characters. I can't believe they are seriously going to walk on the outside and risk the possibility of having to swim. If that happens I'm convinced Lawson will drown, and so will everyone else because Phinn will go crazy and try to kill them all:\ And just thinking about the tipped Kingdom makes my brain all wonky;) I feel so sorry for these people!
You have no idea how nervous I am for your characters. I can't believe they are seriously going to walk on the outside and risk the possibility of having to swim. If that happens I'm convinced Lawson will drown, and so will everyone else because Phinn will go crazy and try to kill them all:\ And just thinking about the tipped Kingdom makes my brain all wonky;) I feel so sorry for these people!
2/6/2012 c4 lobsterwife
This is probably the worst everyone's ever been at. The Kingdom being tipped over was already a huge obstacle, but now Phinn's moments away from going crazy (I'm morbidly curious to see how that situation pans out). There was a lot of frowny faces coming from me during this chapter. I hate seeing everyone so helpless. They can never catch a break! I hope things can get better, but I doubt that will be happening any time soon. I kind of loved Phinn in this chapter (more so than usual sigh). It's heartbreaking to see him so devastated, thinking he's a burden to everyone :( I'm worried for Lawson as well. Hunt does love to play psychological mind games with people, doesn't he? It's interesting. I mean, instead of physically torturing Phinn and Quentin he focuses more on cursing their minds. That's pretty disturbing and makes for an intriguing Big Bad. I want everyone to do their best to defeat him! Then maybe a group hug after? (Not likely haha). I'm super excited to see what's next. The suspense is killing me *dramatic swoon*
This is probably the worst everyone's ever been at. The Kingdom being tipped over was already a huge obstacle, but now Phinn's moments away from going crazy (I'm morbidly curious to see how that situation pans out). There was a lot of frowny faces coming from me during this chapter. I hate seeing everyone so helpless. They can never catch a break! I hope things can get better, but I doubt that will be happening any time soon. I kind of loved Phinn in this chapter (more so than usual sigh). It's heartbreaking to see him so devastated, thinking he's a burden to everyone :( I'm worried for Lawson as well. Hunt does love to play psychological mind games with people, doesn't he? It's interesting. I mean, instead of physically torturing Phinn and Quentin he focuses more on cursing their minds. That's pretty disturbing and makes for an intriguing Big Bad. I want everyone to do their best to defeat him! Then maybe a group hug after? (Not likely haha). I'm super excited to see what's next. The suspense is killing me *dramatic swoon*
2/6/2012 c3 fanx2
I like it when things go bad so much more than when things go well. Is that weird?
I like it when things go bad so much more than when things go well. Is that weird?
2/6/2012 c2 fanx2
Phinn definitely knows. He always seems to know things. I feel like even though hes such a physical person, hes really actually very intuned to everyone elses emotional states. he just likes to hide it. Im overanalyzing things just like Elena haha
Phinn definitely knows. He always seems to know things. I feel like even though hes such a physical person, hes really actually very intuned to everyone elses emotional states. he just likes to hide it. Im overanalyzing things just like Elena haha
2/6/2012 c1 fanx2
great! I loved the refresher. I wonder who the next CB will be. And will Elena still get to hang around? I hope they all get the call for the next one before she tells them what happened. Just for the drama of it all.
great! I loved the refresher. I wonder who the next CB will be. And will Elena still get to hang around? I hope they all get the call for the next one before she tells them what happened. Just for the drama of it all.
2/5/2012 c3 deadgummiegirl
As bad as this sounds, it's so cool that the Kingdom is crashing into to the ocean. I like it when they have other threats besides the Others and Hunt's minions. I wonder what he's planning now.
And I like how when things get bad, everyone puts aside their feelings and works together to keep safe. Like when Phinn gave Turner the gun and they all banded together. They all come together when it really counts.
As bad as this sounds, it's so cool that the Kingdom is crashing into to the ocean. I like it when they have other threats besides the Others and Hunt's minions. I wonder what he's planning now.
And I like how when things get bad, everyone puts aside their feelings and works together to keep safe. Like when Phinn gave Turner the gun and they all banded together. They all come together when it really counts.
2/5/2012 c3 lobsterwife
Oh crap. I actually expected things to go smoothly for at least a while. That was a bad assumption on my part. This is kind of a terrible situation what with the Kingdom sinking (I assume it's sinking anyway), and the Others just hanging around. Once again I find myself extremely excited/worried about what's going to happen next. Where's Hayden when you need him *sigh* Hopefully he's not in too much of a scrape (yeah right...). Things I Loved in this Chapter: Phinn randomly having weapons on him, and the Sons (minus Cole) being all whatever about the Others. I liked Turner's line about how they're always killing themselves trying not to be killed. So true. Everyone in this series is rather death-prone haha. How will the Sons + Elena get out of this one? Your update speed fills me with happiness, by the way. I get so excited :)!
Oh crap. I actually expected things to go smoothly for at least a while. That was a bad assumption on my part. This is kind of a terrible situation what with the Kingdom sinking (I assume it's sinking anyway), and the Others just hanging around. Once again I find myself extremely excited/worried about what's going to happen next. Where's Hayden when you need him *sigh* Hopefully he's not in too much of a scrape (yeah right...). Things I Loved in this Chapter: Phinn randomly having weapons on him, and the Sons (minus Cole) being all whatever about the Others. I liked Turner's line about how they're always killing themselves trying not to be killed. So true. Everyone in this series is rather death-prone haha. How will the Sons + Elena get out of this one? Your update speed fills me with happiness, by the way. I get so excited :)!
2/4/2012 c2 deadgummiegirl
Phinn is very perceptive. It's like he's a mind reader or something. He's so precious though, being all upset that Elena went behind his back. If that is what he's talking about, which it probably is. Sometimes he just makes me wish he was real so I could hug him;)
Phinn is very perceptive. It's like he's a mind reader or something. He's so precious though, being all upset that Elena went behind his back. If that is what he's talking about, which it probably is. Sometimes he just makes me wish he was real so I could hug him;)
2/4/2012 c2 lobsterwife
This was a nice chapter. I liked the little introductions with the Sons. It's a good refresher since I kind of forgot what some of them looked like. Aww Cole and Elena are friends! That makes me so happy. I'm a huge Cole fan right now. He's such a jerk, but it makes him a lot more loveable. I think the Sons are a loveable bunch because of their faults. At least that's why I like them. Hmm I wonder what made Phinn attack Cole like that? Considering Phinn's personality anything can set him off haha. Speaking of my favorite Son (yes I play favorites ;3) I kind of had a feeling he knew about what Elena did with Hayden (if that's what he's referring to anyway). I mean, he knew about Jenny's pregnancy, and all that stuff with Anya and Hunt. He's quite a perceptive kid. Gah Elena! What are you going to do now, girl? I wouldn't want to be in your position right now. Two chapters in two days? I'm in heaven *faints*
This was a nice chapter. I liked the little introductions with the Sons. It's a good refresher since I kind of forgot what some of them looked like. Aww Cole and Elena are friends! That makes me so happy. I'm a huge Cole fan right now. He's such a jerk, but it makes him a lot more loveable. I think the Sons are a loveable bunch because of their faults. At least that's why I like them. Hmm I wonder what made Phinn attack Cole like that? Considering Phinn's personality anything can set him off haha. Speaking of my favorite Son (yes I play favorites ;3) I kind of had a feeling he knew about what Elena did with Hayden (if that's what he's referring to anyway). I mean, he knew about Jenny's pregnancy, and all that stuff with Anya and Hunt. He's quite a perceptive kid. Gah Elena! What are you going to do now, girl? I wouldn't want to be in your position right now. Two chapters in two days? I'm in heaven *faints*
2/4/2012 c1 2Autumn's Imagination
great start! Keep it up!
Now I'm left to wonder what will come first - Elena telling or the next chaste beauty awakening...
2Autumn's Imaginationgreat start! Keep it up!
Now I'm left to wonder what will come first - Elena telling or the next chaste beauty awakening...
2/3/2012 c1 deadgummiegirl
I'm so excited you're already posting this! I can't believe she actually went through with it! When I started reading it I actually gasped out loud because I was so shocked and excited. And I bet you're going to torture us by prolonging her telling everyone for as long as possible;)
And I really love how you sort of sum up everything that's happened and all of the backstory. It's really helpful for those of us who tend to forget some of the little things;)
I'm so excited you're already posting this! I can't believe she actually went through with it! When I started reading it I actually gasped out loud because I was so shocked and excited. And I bet you're going to torture us by prolonging her telling everyone for as long as possible;)
And I really love how you sort of sum up everything that's happened and all of the backstory. It's really helpful for those of us who tend to forget some of the little things;)
2/3/2012 c1 1lobsterwife
YESSSS! I'm so excited! When I saw the update I actually started screaming and jumping around haha. What a nice way to start off book four. Even though I did some rereading during our time off, I still forgot some stuff. It was so nicely explained :) This chapter also presented some questions that I hope to see explored: Lawson's relationship with Adrianne, Hayden's secrecy, Ryder's mother, and when the new Chaste Beauty will appear (I am particularly excited about that). Though what I'm most looking foreward to is how Elena's relationships with Lawson and Phinn will develop in this book. It's true that Elena is sort of a forbidden fruit kind of thing. With that gone how will she be treated? I'm quite interested. How will the boys react to Elena's Awakening? I have my theories :) Anyway! I'm SO EXCITED! I have a feeling this book will be as awesome as all the others :D (also I hope Cole is okay lol)
1lobsterwifeYESSSS! I'm so excited! When I saw the update I actually started screaming and jumping around haha. What a nice way to start off book four. Even though I did some rereading during our time off, I still forgot some stuff. It was so nicely explained :) This chapter also presented some questions that I hope to see explored: Lawson's relationship with Adrianne, Hayden's secrecy, Ryder's mother, and when the new Chaste Beauty will appear (I am particularly excited about that). Though what I'm most looking foreward to is how Elena's relationships with Lawson and Phinn will develop in this book. It's true that Elena is sort of a forbidden fruit kind of thing. With that gone how will she be treated? I'm quite interested. How will the boys react to Elena's Awakening? I have my theories :) Anyway! I'm SO EXCITED! I have a feeling this book will be as awesome as all the others :D (also I hope Cole is okay lol)