for Shadow of a person2/4/2012 c1 Punslinger
A deeply moving evocation of the hopeless sense of loss that we all have (or will have) experienced in life.
"...and I recede back/in an eternal dance/of reliving." - I like the subtle power of that.
A deeply moving evocation of the hopeless sense of loss that we all have (or will have) experienced in life.
"...and I recede back/in an eternal dance/of reliving." - I like the subtle power of that.
2/4/2012 c1 
20Maria Patenaude
I'm sorry I hadn't read or commented on your work for a long while. I won't give my reasons/excuses; they pale in comparison to what you're going through.
I remember you writing about your father a long while back, whether in a story, poem, or a PM, I can't recall... but I do remember you saying he was a kind, gentle person. I wish you weren't suffering this pain. I'm sure he knew how much you loved him.
I wish I had the perfect words for you, but there is no such thing. All I can say is how glad I am that you had your father for the time that you did, and that he was someone you could be proud of.
20Maria PatenaudeI'm sorry I hadn't read or commented on your work for a long while. I won't give my reasons/excuses; they pale in comparison to what you're going through.
I remember you writing about your father a long while back, whether in a story, poem, or a PM, I can't recall... but I do remember you saying he was a kind, gentle person. I wish you weren't suffering this pain. I'm sure he knew how much you loved him.
I wish I had the perfect words for you, but there is no such thing. All I can say is how glad I am that you had your father for the time that you did, and that he was someone you could be proud of.