for Hate turns to love3/9/2012 c7 XxKaori-chanxX
Heyyyy there!
Awesome chapter! This is probably the best one yet, and is the person at the end Brent...? No. Don't tell me, I'll just wait to read it.
Also, Tom is coming off as a bit of an arse hole... hehe. I hope he changes his attitude! :3
Well done again!
Heyyyy there!
Awesome chapter! This is probably the best one yet, and is the person at the end Brent...? No. Don't tell me, I'll just wait to read it.
Also, Tom is coming off as a bit of an arse hole... hehe. I hope he changes his attitude! :3
Well done again!
3/8/2012 c7 
6Chola13
Its Brent Jackson! lol please update when you can i really want to know what is going on with chanice xx
6Chola13Its Brent Jackson! lol please update when you can i really want to know what is going on with chanice xx
3/6/2012 c1 Xiang4Yu
Ooh, interesting plot line! I'm interested in seeing what comes out next. :3 TomxClaire! :D
The only real thing that bothers me is that I feel like this is going too fast to be realistic.
I really like the Tom and Claire scenes during their computer class. You should write more of those. I find them very amusing.
xD
I'm finally reading/reviewing your story. I think that's it (for now).
Ooh, interesting plot line! I'm interested in seeing what comes out next. :3 TomxClaire! :D
The only real thing that bothers me is that I feel like this is going too fast to be realistic.
I really like the Tom and Claire scenes during their computer class. You should write more of those. I find them very amusing.
xD
I'm finally reading/reviewing your story. I think that's it (for now).
3/6/2012 c6 Chola13
OKay on the last line i think you missed a word out but other than that i loved this chapter... she finally realised that she has feelings for Tom and i cant believe he did that to her! well at least their eyes locked for a moment which shows he isnt really into Jillian :D Update soon please xx
OKay on the last line i think you missed a word out but other than that i loved this chapter... she finally realised that she has feelings for Tom and i cant believe he did that to her! well at least their eyes locked for a moment which shows he isnt really into Jillian :D Update soon please xx
3/6/2012 c1 Lovely Dreams
Tom Daley? You named your character after a teenage swimmer?
Yaaay an actual british person of fictionpress! Awesome story by the way!
Tom Daley? You named your character after a teenage swimmer?
Yaaay an actual british person of fictionpress! Awesome story by the way!
3/6/2012 c6 XxKaori-chanxX
I agree, poor Claire! But it did seem as though Jillian had forced herself onto Tom, so maybe it wasn't his fault...? Also, she so OBVIOUSLY likes him. She just needs to admit it to herself.
Anywhozal, awesome chapter! It was short and sweet, but still good. Hurry up with the next one! I'm anxious for what will happen :P P.S. Sophie seems like an awesome friend to have ;)
P.P.S. I am jealous of Claire's double Kitkat.
I agree, poor Claire! But it did seem as though Jillian had forced herself onto Tom, so maybe it wasn't his fault...? Also, she so OBVIOUSLY likes him. She just needs to admit it to herself.
Anywhozal, awesome chapter! It was short and sweet, but still good. Hurry up with the next one! I'm anxious for what will happen :P P.S. Sophie seems like an awesome friend to have ;)
P.P.S. I am jealous of Claire's double Kitkat.
3/1/2012 c5 XxKaori-chanxX
OOH! The tension! The awesome romantic tension! T'was epic.
No, the ending wasn't dull, just not a cliffie as such :)
The blackmaily-bribe thing was good. I mean, forcing somebody to be a lead in a show where she has to kiss him? Awkward llama, much?
I didn't see any mistakes in this chappie either... so all around *clap clap clap!* well done!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, now. Waheyy!
OOH! The tension! The awesome romantic tension! T'was epic.
No, the ending wasn't dull, just not a cliffie as such :)
The blackmaily-bribe thing was good. I mean, forcing somebody to be a lead in a show where she has to kiss him? Awkward llama, much?
I didn't see any mistakes in this chappie either... so all around *clap clap clap!* well done!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, now. Waheyy!
3/1/2012 c5 Chola13
OOOOOO What does he have to be guilty about? hmmm Please update soon i loved this chapter x and i never thought that he ould blackmail her to be in the play.. that thought never crossed my mind xx
OOOOOO What does he have to be guilty about? hmmm Please update soon i loved this chapter x and i never thought that he ould blackmail her to be in the play.. that thought never crossed my mind xx
2/26/2012 c4 XxKaori-chanxX
:O That was epic! But mehh. Why didn't Tom make a huge love confession or something? He totally should have kissed her. Or would that have been weird because they hardly know each other yet? Ah well. I'm excited for the next chapter :D
P.s. You're welcome!
P.p.s. There were a few mistakes in here (sorry I can't remember where) spelling wise and words running into each other and stuff. So make sure you read through your work before you post it, just to be sure. Other than that it was a great chapter!
:O That was epic! But mehh. Why didn't Tom make a huge love confession or something? He totally should have kissed her. Or would that have been weird because they hardly know each other yet? Ah well. I'm excited for the next chapter :D
P.s. You're welcome!
P.p.s. There were a few mistakes in here (sorry I can't remember where) spelling wise and words running into each other and stuff. So make sure you read through your work before you post it, just to be sure. Other than that it was a great chapter!
2/23/2012 c4 6Chola13
i really thought he was going to lol but wow i want to know what he wants xx please update soon x
6Chola13i really thought he was going to lol but wow i want to know what he wants xx please update soon x
2/21/2012 c1 Cecilia A
You have a lot of run-on sentences here and a couple places where I'm not sure what you mean. A couple tense issues; most of it is past tense, but read through for the couple times you switch to present.
I have a few predictions, but I should probably keep them to myself. :)
-Cecilia
You have a lot of run-on sentences here and a couple places where I'm not sure what you mean. A couple tense issues; most of it is past tense, but read through for the couple times you switch to present.
I have a few predictions, but I should probably keep them to myself. :)
-Cecilia
2/20/2012 c3 Chola13
I say about 10 lol
Cant wait for teh next update... and who is it that left with her? hmmm x
I say about 10 lol
Cant wait for teh next update... and who is it that left with her? hmmm x