
8/18/2012 c25 DarkRosexx
Let me first say -I loved it! I'm sorry I just got here.. Didn't start reading it until today :x
Epilogue please? It doesn't seem completely without one :o
Anyway, it was great. I'm going on over to check out your other stories now.
Let me first say -I loved it! I'm sorry I just got here.. Didn't start reading it until today :x
Epilogue please? It doesn't seem completely without one :o
Anyway, it was great. I'm going on over to check out your other stories now.
8/17/2012 c25 JJsMommy29
u loved it and i no i didn't think you would break them up and i think you ended this story great
u loved it and i no i didn't think you would break them up and i think you ended this story great
8/17/2012 c25 Xiang4Yu
There should be an epilogue of them in the far-off future. As in, they're married and possibly have kid(s) {if the two actually survive as a couple}.
There should be an epilogue of them in the far-off future. As in, they're married and possibly have kid(s) {if the two actually survive as a couple}.
8/15/2012 c24 hearts a heavy burden x
aww poor claire. tom seriously has issues.
I really like how it's not all chocolates and roses with their relationship but SERIOUSLY you can't break them up they belong together- well maybe, who really would want to stay with him if he is a jerk. so yeah can't wait to find out what happens next update soon xxx
aww poor claire. tom seriously has issues.
I really like how it's not all chocolates and roses with their relationship but SERIOUSLY you can't break them up they belong together- well maybe, who really would want to stay with him if he is a jerk. so yeah can't wait to find out what happens next update soon xxx
8/11/2012 c24
3HalfwayParanoid
Wow, (Starts panicking.) Are they really through? It can't be! I nearly cried at that end: it was something I was NOT expecting. I like you for that. Keep it up, look foreward to the next chapter (Especially since I am off Tech Ban. Whoop!)

Wow, (Starts panicking.) Are they really through? It can't be! I nearly cried at that end: it was something I was NOT expecting. I like you for that. Keep it up, look foreward to the next chapter (Especially since I am off Tech Ban. Whoop!)
8/11/2012 c24
3Lovely Dreams
i actually review all the stories I read on my phone as well, so I when I read my review today I just realised how many typos there were O.o sorry! Glad you enjoyed the cookies *thumbs up* and I agree, Tom is probably preggerz and in dire need of a pee, poor guy -.- I am goin to check out your other story now, and cant wait for the next chappie :) I wont be surprised if Claire ends up with Brentonio though...

i actually review all the stories I read on my phone as well, so I when I read my review today I just realised how many typos there were O.o sorry! Glad you enjoyed the cookies *thumbs up* and I agree, Tom is probably preggerz and in dire need of a pee, poor guy -.- I am goin to check out your other story now, and cant wait for the next chappie :) I wont be surprised if Claire ends up with Brentonio though...
8/10/2012 c24 JJsMommy29
i hope there not over so like them together but can't wait to see what happens next so update soon and now going to go check out your new story
i hope there not over so like them together but can't wait to see what happens next so update soon and now going to go check out your new story
8/5/2012 c23 KelsonaMuffin
uhh tht one was short and there was no romance in it (. even though tom was really stupid 2 say tht 2 claire. i still love him though so if claire needs a break ill take her place ;D. and there nothing that u the writer or claire his girlfriend can do 2 stop meh muuhahahahahaha... HA
anyways love it and plzz upload soon kkz love yeahh
uhh tht one was short and there was no romance in it (. even though tom was really stupid 2 say tht 2 claire. i still love him though so if claire needs a break ill take her place ;D. and there nothing that u the writer or claire his girlfriend can do 2 stop meh muuhahahahahaha... HA
anyways love it and plzz upload soon kkz love yeahh
8/4/2012 c23
3Lovely Dreams
Hola Great Colly of Ye Englande, have no fear, your epic reviewer HAS RETURNEDafter moving house ) Haha I see I've missed a lot since last time - I actually thought the story had ended but now I understand that instead of a sequel u have continued it! dundunDUN well Im certainly on the edge of my seat and I do adore this story! *gives bag of cookies as an apology* is cinnamon and chocolate chips okay with you :D Mmm Tom ish a feisty woman on her period right now huh? And can this teacher have rumors about bein a paedo circling but he actually has a sob story behind being strict that Claire uncovers while retrieving the phone eg she overhears him cryin over his wife who died of cancer or something?
Yours faithfully
The loveliest Dream of all :)

Hola Great Colly of Ye Englande, have no fear, your epic reviewer HAS RETURNEDafter moving house ) Haha I see I've missed a lot since last time - I actually thought the story had ended but now I understand that instead of a sequel u have continued it! dundunDUN well Im certainly on the edge of my seat and I do adore this story! *gives bag of cookies as an apology* is cinnamon and chocolate chips okay with you :D Mmm Tom ish a feisty woman on her period right now huh? And can this teacher have rumors about bein a paedo circling but he actually has a sob story behind being strict that Claire uncovers while retrieving the phone eg she overhears him cryin over his wife who died of cancer or something?
Yours faithfully
The loveliest Dream of all :)
8/4/2012 c23
1Blue-Zalea
Nice job! Great emotion as always... I can't decide whether to take Claire or Tom's side haha XD well update soon!

Nice job! Great emotion as always... I can't decide whether to take Claire or Tom's side haha XD well update soon!
8/3/2012 c23 JJsMommy29
interesting chapter and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter so update soon
interesting chapter and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter so update soon
8/3/2012 c1
8brittle.star
Awwwww, super cute. I like it so far. Tom sounds adorable, and very geek chic.

Awwwww, super cute. I like it so far. Tom sounds adorable, and very geek chic.
8/3/2012 c23 thetiredchild
The supply teacher in my school is exactly the same, ugh... Anyway awesome chapter! Tom's mood-swings are getting a little bit more frequent so the next chapter will be interesting... Update! :)
The supply teacher in my school is exactly the same, ugh... Anyway awesome chapter! Tom's mood-swings are getting a little bit more frequent so the next chapter will be interesting... Update! :)
8/1/2012 c22 Xiang4Yu
When you described the apartment in which Tom lived in, it sounded really dilapidated. Not to mention you describe the father as alcoholic. If that's the case, then why on earth didn't Tom call the police before? He was clearly living in a terrible environment. I would also like to say that I feel like Tom is slowly transforming from a computer, distant nerd to someone much more violent and angst-y.
I liked the date, though. It was a nice touch back into their childhood.
When you described the apartment in which Tom lived in, it sounded really dilapidated. Not to mention you describe the father as alcoholic. If that's the case, then why on earth didn't Tom call the police before? He was clearly living in a terrible environment. I would also like to say that I feel like Tom is slowly transforming from a computer, distant nerd to someone much more violent and angst-y.
I liked the date, though. It was a nice touch back into their childhood.