for Hate turns to love7/8/2012 c21 EmotionsMakeYouReal
I love that you developed Tom and Clair's relationship in this chapter and even though it wasn't as fast paced (as you mentioned at the beginning) it wasnt boring at all. Please please pleae update soon because I really love this story :)
I love that you developed Tom and Clair's relationship in this chapter and even though it wasn't as fast paced (as you mentioned at the beginning) it wasnt boring at all. Please please pleae update soon because I really love this story :)
7/8/2012 c21 
3HalfwayParanoid
I am happy and...aww! You left a cliffhanger! Your doing great and thanks for responding. ) I kind of understand what Sophia is going through. I also wonder what Tom meant by having sent his Dad to jail, and why would he feel worried about it? Doesn't he and his Dad not get along real well? Sorry about the questions, that's just what is going through my head. It's going good and I thought at first it was odd to have a date at the park playground, but you made it seem fun for the couple.
Keep it up and update soon please, sometimes one can almost forget what the story is about after so long of a wait. (I am NOT like that though.)
3HalfwayParanoidI am happy and...aww! You left a cliffhanger! Your doing great and thanks for responding. ) I kind of understand what Sophia is going through. I also wonder what Tom meant by having sent his Dad to jail, and why would he feel worried about it? Doesn't he and his Dad not get along real well? Sorry about the questions, that's just what is going through my head. It's going good and I thought at first it was odd to have a date at the park playground, but you made it seem fun for the couple.
Keep it up and update soon please, sometimes one can almost forget what the story is about after so long of a wait. (I am NOT like that though.)
7/8/2012 c21 6Chola13
Awwwwww their date was so so sweet, and you ended on a cliff hanger! I know i do it but please, it is just a little evil! : ( update soon though because i love this!
6Chola13Awwwwww their date was so so sweet, and you ended on a cliff hanger! I know i do it but please, it is just a little evil! : ( update soon though because i love this!
6/20/2012 c20 Update soon
why haven't you updates yet? please update soon!
why haven't you updates yet? please update soon!
6/17/2012 c20 Chola13
Sorry it took me so long to reply i havent been able to catch up or update, its hell lol x
I like this new chapter, it ended quite right, and left us in claire's position which was amazing. i hope you update soon, and dont worry im not bored of this yet x
Sorry it took me so long to reply i havent been able to catch up or update, its hell lol x
I like this new chapter, it ended quite right, and left us in claire's position which was amazing. i hope you update soon, and dont worry im not bored of this yet x
6/16/2012 c20 hearts a heavy burden x
I feel sorry for chanice not really getting to know her dad.
Her dad, Mr daley is a bit weird.-clearly he has issues.I'm upset that tom blew their cover so quickly but it did make it more interesting. Update soon.
I feel sorry for chanice not really getting to know her dad.
Her dad, Mr daley is a bit weird.-clearly he has issues.I'm upset that tom blew their cover so quickly but it did make it more interesting. Update soon.
6/14/2012 c20 Xiang4Yu
For some inexplicable reason, I thought this was the last chapter and I panicked. Then I actually started reading the chapter and sighed in relief. I was somewhat surprised to find that the dad was not in the best condition. I know that his life is in tatters (and he was drinking a bit), but I felt that it was a bit unrealistic that he told his problems to Chanice and Claire while they were all in the car. Usually people, especially adults, aren't willing to tell strangers, especially kids, their problems.
For some inexplicable reason, I thought this was the last chapter and I panicked. Then I actually started reading the chapter and sighed in relief. I was somewhat surprised to find that the dad was not in the best condition. I know that his life is in tatters (and he was drinking a bit), but I felt that it was a bit unrealistic that he told his problems to Chanice and Claire while they were all in the car. Usually people, especially adults, aren't willing to tell strangers, especially kids, their problems.
6/12/2012 c20 3HalfwayParanoid
The chapter was good, and mostly realistic, I kind of got lost for a second in the middle and towards the end. But don't panic, that was my bad there. As for realistic? So far, it was realistic, Tom's dad was pretty realistic, until you get to the end. You kind of rushed the end a little, I mean, I understand you can't dwell on somethings, and when writting, you have to make things seem rushed. So far, your doing good. I found you messed up near the beggining where Sophie asked her friend if it was a good idea to go to the office to find Tom's dad, (I kind of can't get some events right after I just read.) Back to the review; Yes, it's a little long. You didn't really indicate well enough who was responding to Sophie's question. So I kind of stumbled there. All in all, you did great and wonderful and am enjoying this story. Keep up the good work and I look forward to chapter 21.
3HalfwayParanoidThe chapter was good, and mostly realistic, I kind of got lost for a second in the middle and towards the end. But don't panic, that was my bad there. As for realistic? So far, it was realistic, Tom's dad was pretty realistic, until you get to the end. You kind of rushed the end a little, I mean, I understand you can't dwell on somethings, and when writting, you have to make things seem rushed. So far, your doing good. I found you messed up near the beggining where Sophie asked her friend if it was a good idea to go to the office to find Tom's dad, (I kind of can't get some events right after I just read.) Back to the review; Yes, it's a little long. You didn't really indicate well enough who was responding to Sophie's question. So I kind of stumbled there. All in all, you did great and wonderful and am enjoying this story. Keep up the good work and I look forward to chapter 21.
6/12/2012 c20 6Carmel March
I am in love with this story. Holy moly. I just read through it in one go and I couldn't believe it when I read the end. I can't wait to read more!
6Carmel MarchI am in love with this story. Holy moly. I just read through it in one go and I couldn't believe it when I read the end. I can't wait to read more!
6/11/2012 c20 Guest
no problem and i think you did great on this chapter can't wait to find out what happens next so update soon
no problem and i think you did great on this chapter can't wait to find out what happens next so update soon
6/11/2012 c19 6Chola13
Wow, i love that and you definately have to delve deeper into Tom's probelms with his dad and to be honest i dont know when this should end, i love it so much x
And yeah i text back saying, dont you get it? and they replied what? so you love me? i couldnt stop laughin it was hilarious! Update soon please xx
6Chola13Wow, i love that and you definately have to delve deeper into Tom's probelms with his dad and to be honest i dont know when this should end, i love it so much x
And yeah i text back saying, dont you get it? and they replied what? so you love me? i couldnt stop laughin it was hilarious! Update soon please xx
6/7/2012 c19 Candyfloss
It's me again, formerly known as LurvedIt.
I did like this chapter but it was short so I can't sat I loved it. So I had to change my name to Candyfloss, because I love candy floss.
Thank you for replying to my review and I don't think I will be making an account on here. Since I won't be posting any stories I don't see the point.
Anyway, nice chapter. Hoping for probably another 10 more? And about Tom's dad... DUH! Go into it lady!
It's me again, formerly known as LurvedIt.
I did like this chapter but it was short so I can't sat I loved it. So I had to change my name to Candyfloss, because I love candy floss.
Thank you for replying to my review and I don't think I will be making an account on here. Since I won't be posting any stories I don't see the point.
Anyway, nice chapter. Hoping for probably another 10 more? And about Tom's dad... DUH! Go into it lady!
6/6/2012 c19 1Light15
First I'd like to apologize for the late review. I didn't get a chance to read this chapter earlier.
I hope you do good in all your exams though! I'm sending you my own personal hopes, okay?
Ew with the water thing, that's just nasty.
Talking of my friend, she said that you like her more than me. Please tell me Miss Colly, do you like her more than me? I mean come on! She didn't review last chapter, I did! This is for you Ilovecowz15! She likes me more than you so back off! Shes my friend!
Finally, good luck in your exams and update soon!
1Light15First I'd like to apologize for the late review. I didn't get a chance to read this chapter earlier.
I hope you do good in all your exams though! I'm sending you my own personal hopes, okay?
Ew with the water thing, that's just nasty.
Talking of my friend, she said that you like her more than me. Please tell me Miss Colly, do you like her more than me? I mean come on! She didn't review last chapter, I did! This is for you Ilovecowz15! She likes me more than you so back off! Shes my friend!
Finally, good luck in your exams and update soon!