for An Island Feels No Pain2/13/2012 c2 AdriannaRomantica
I love how this was all on Doug. You gave us so much on just what he was thinking; I found this quite interesting. I love getting inside one character's head and finding out what they think about the other character. Nice chapter, and thanks for sharing.
I love how this was all on Doug. You gave us so much on just what he was thinking; I found this quite interesting. I love getting inside one character's head and finding out what they think about the other character. Nice chapter, and thanks for sharing.
2/13/2012 c2 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
Ah he's wee and adorable!^^
I'm really enjoying the dynamic between them, and I like how Doug makes Mason nervous.
Looking forward to your next update
Suki ^.^
Ah he's wee and adorable!^^
I'm really enjoying the dynamic between them, and I like how Doug makes Mason nervous.
Looking forward to your next update
Suki ^.^
2/12/2012 c1 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
Oh, I have a thing for firey red heads^^ I'm interested to see where you're going with this.
And I like this line a lot '...because no one even cares enough to get close enough to peal away the prickly outer coating...'
Suki ^.^
Oh, I have a thing for firey red heads^^ I'm interested to see where you're going with this.
And I like this line a lot '...because no one even cares enough to get close enough to peal away the prickly outer coating...'
Suki ^.^
2/12/2012 c1 AdriannaRomantica
It is really good so far. I love that they are not on the same page in the beginning, but that is obviously going to change. I enjoyed your descriptions; mainly the diction. I also enjoyed the Scottish guy in America; it's a nice change in scenery. I loved the way you made Doug describe Mason; he tries to sound as if he despises this new guy, but the words he chooses clearly makes it evident that he's deveolping feelings for him - even from the beginning - which is cute. Looking forward to reading more. Don't neglect your other stories now *nudge, nudge*, The Halloween Incident. Thanks for sharing!
It is really good so far. I love that they are not on the same page in the beginning, but that is obviously going to change. I enjoyed your descriptions; mainly the diction. I also enjoyed the Scottish guy in America; it's a nice change in scenery. I loved the way you made Doug describe Mason; he tries to sound as if he despises this new guy, but the words he chooses clearly makes it evident that he's deveolping feelings for him - even from the beginning - which is cute. Looking forward to reading more. Don't neglect your other stories now *nudge, nudge*, The Halloween Incident. Thanks for sharing!
2/11/2012 c1 AndiLim
I like this. It interests me what's going to happen and how they're like total opposites
I like this. It interests me what's going to happen and how they're like total opposites
2/11/2012 c1 
16xXBladeXx9
Nyan~!
First review! *dances*
I love this. It's so adorable, Mason's totally getting to Doug and it's just deathly sweet. I can't wait to hear more about this pair (: Your stories are always so great, you're brilliant!
If you need anything, abosultely anything, just let me know, I'll help you in an instant! (:
16xXBladeXx9Nyan~!
First review! *dances*
I love this. It's so adorable, Mason's totally getting to Doug and it's just deathly sweet. I can't wait to hear more about this pair (: Your stories are always so great, you're brilliant!
If you need anything, abosultely anything, just let me know, I'll help you in an instant! (: