for Alien girl, Shiki10/21/2014 c1 Sayuri Lapis
It's nice, I really like it so far.
It's nice, I really like it so far.
12/10/2012 c1 Yuri-Hime-Chan
Well, it is a seemingly well though out plot so far, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Well, it is a seemingly well though out plot so far, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
11/9/2012 c6 Yumko Yummy
it was a lovely story. i'm glad you got to finish it. keep up the good work.
it was a lovely story. i'm glad you got to finish it. keep up the good work.
11/9/2012 c6 Shadoo
So. How long have I been following this for? Two years?
AND IT'S FINALLY OVER.
I have to say I'm disappointed, but all stories have to end one day, even if it leads into another.
This, my friend, was A. MAZE. ING. Kairin's change of heart almost made me cry inside- Shiki, now you have nothing to worry about, and can live peacefully!
And the one song that totally sums up the epilogue:
HEY! I just met you
and this is crazy;
But here's my number!
So call me maybe? XD
So. How long have I been following this for? Two years?
AND IT'S FINALLY OVER.
I have to say I'm disappointed, but all stories have to end one day, even if it leads into another.
This, my friend, was A. MAZE. ING. Kairin's change of heart almost made me cry inside- Shiki, now you have nothing to worry about, and can live peacefully!
And the one song that totally sums up the epilogue:
HEY! I just met you
and this is crazy;
But here's my number!
So call me maybe? XD
10/29/2012 c5 Guest
I honestly thought this was the last chapter until I read the author's note. XD
I like this chapter! I may try drawing Shiki for fanart (ftw) or something, I dunno...
I honestly didn't know that Makoto (? Forgot how to spell it...) would accept her, so I'm happy now! :D Yay!
I honestly thought this was the last chapter until I read the author's note. XD
I like this chapter! I may try drawing Shiki for fanart (ftw) or something, I dunno...
I honestly didn't know that Makoto (? Forgot how to spell it...) would accept her, so I'm happy now! :D Yay!
9/27/2012 c3 Miles Montgomery
The only part that confuses me is how Makoto was thrusting against Shiki. You didn't explain that very well. Was she using her tongue, a strap on, or does she have a dick? You really should explain that more because it's confusing.
The only part that confuses me is how Makoto was thrusting against Shiki. You didn't explain that very well. Was she using her tongue, a strap on, or does she have a dick? You really should explain that more because it's confusing.
9/27/2012 c2 Miles Montgomery
Another good chapter. Not much happening right now but you're still setting up the story so that's cool.
Another good chapter. Not much happening right now but you're still setting up the story so that's cool.
9/27/2012 c1 Miles Montgomery
An interesting concept. I actually like it. Although I just finished Melamin not too long ago that was somewhat similar to this. So already I'm enjoying it. Will read more.
An interesting concept. I actually like it. Although I just finished Melamin not too long ago that was somewhat similar to this. So already I'm enjoying it. Will read more.
9/23/2012 c4 earthserpent
finally you updated...now update again. :)
finally you updated...now update again. :)
9/22/2012 c4 Shado-chan
*processing mode*
D: that was awesome.
No lie. My heart started racing when Shiki had the nightmare. I felt like I was standing beside her, watching from in the story. Great job! Continue!
*processing mode*
D: that was awesome.
No lie. My heart started racing when Shiki had the nightmare. I felt like I was standing beside her, watching from in the story. Great job! Continue!
7/7/2012 c1 
3Koray
This is very well written. I have only the time at the current moment to read the first chapter, but the preview, summary, and the hints throughout the first chapter make me curious as to what is going to happen down the road with the two lovers. Will they end up married? How is it that shiki knows so much about such advanced classes? Haha, guess ill have to read and find out wont i? ) well done!
3KorayThis is very well written. I have only the time at the current moment to read the first chapter, but the preview, summary, and the hints throughout the first chapter make me curious as to what is going to happen down the road with the two lovers. Will they end up married? How is it that shiki knows so much about such advanced classes? Haha, guess ill have to read and find out wont i? ) well done!
6/29/2012 c3 4Administrator Video
*reads*
Why the heck am I reading this? XD
Anyways...
I like this chapter a lot! That mysterious Russian girl was really exciting to find out about, and I want to see what'll happen when Shiki meets her next...oh. I'm thinking dirty thoughts now. XD
4Administrator Video*reads*
Why the heck am I reading this? XD
Anyways...
I like this chapter a lot! That mysterious Russian girl was really exciting to find out about, and I want to see what'll happen when Shiki meets her next...oh. I'm thinking dirty thoughts now. XD