for Still Invisible6/13/2017 c3 Wildcat227
two psychics!? I am really liking this story. but I noticed that, once I went over it again, chap 1 had some spelling mistakes.
two psychics!? I am really liking this story. but I noticed that, once I went over it again, chap 1 had some spelling mistakes.
9/24/2012 c4 
1Let The Wings Soar
more. Now. Get writing.
Haha no take your time! but this is really intriguing and an interesting POV. I haven't read a story on here from the eyes of a ghost.
1Let The Wings Soarmore. Now. Get writing.
Haha no take your time! but this is really intriguing and an interesting POV. I haven't read a story on here from the eyes of a ghost.
7/12/2012 c4 YuePantera
This was really really good story. It's unique and I haven't seen one like this before. :) It's definitely original and I really like the plot so far. It seemed a bit rushed, but that doesn't matter because I enjoyed every word. Your writing style makes it easy to read and the reader doesn't get bored. You stick to the point and it is easy to visualise. The characters are great and I almost cried for Lulu! Very good story and I can't wait for an update!
This was really really good story. It's unique and I haven't seen one like this before. :) It's definitely original and I really like the plot so far. It seemed a bit rushed, but that doesn't matter because I enjoyed every word. Your writing style makes it easy to read and the reader doesn't get bored. You stick to the point and it is easy to visualise. The characters are great and I almost cried for Lulu! Very good story and I can't wait for an update!
6/19/2012 c4 10Nami98
Wow! this is really good! but im curious as to why everything changed so suddenly! update soon! :D
10Nami98Wow! this is really good! but im curious as to why everything changed so suddenly! update soon! :D
3/30/2012 c4 1LovelessAddiction
Okay, I officially love this story. I don't usually go look for original stories to read but I am glad I chose to finally try them out. And I have to say this story is turning out really well. Its so cute, I am glad I found it :D
1LovelessAddictionOkay, I officially love this story. I don't usually go look for original stories to read but I am glad I chose to finally try them out. And I have to say this story is turning out really well. Its so cute, I am glad I found it :D
3/27/2012 c4 Nephythys
Moi like it. Moi want you to update real fast.
:)
Moi like it. Moi want you to update real fast.
:)
3/27/2012 c4 Punam
OMG AMAZING STORY! please please please continue this, can't wait to read more :D
OMG AMAZING STORY! please please please continue this, can't wait to read more :D
3/26/2012 c3 zanmetsun
I noticed that you always end a chapter with a cliffy and it's quite short~ but it's cool it makes some readers like me asking for more. This Fredrick guy is a brunet OTL Brunets are so adorable and cute. I really like your characters so far. I hope you update soon. :)
I noticed that you always end a chapter with a cliffy and it's quite short~ but it's cool it makes some readers like me asking for more. This Fredrick guy is a brunet OTL Brunets are so adorable and cute. I really like your characters so far. I hope you update soon. :)
3/24/2012 c2 zanmetsun
I'm usually scrolling down to look at the summaries of the stories posted here and I found yours. It caught my attention and I read it. It got me interested so I read the chapters so far. The latest chapter was a good start to your story. You should update, I would love to continue reading it. :)
I'm usually scrolling down to look at the summaries of the stories posted here and I found yours. It caught my attention and I read it. It got me interested so I read the chapters so far. The latest chapter was a good start to your story. You should update, I would love to continue reading it. :)
2/17/2012 c1 Julia
Hi! So, I'm new to this site, I just found it like 5 minutes ago, and this was the first story I found. Lol, I was surprised to see that you had just published this today, and its really good. I love to write, and I'm thinking of making an account. I honestly can't say that there was anything wrong with your story. I loved it. I'll be looking forward to Chapter 2! And if I do make an account, I think I'll tell you my username, because I hope you can look at my stories and give me feedback. Thanks!
Hi! So, I'm new to this site, I just found it like 5 minutes ago, and this was the first story I found. Lol, I was surprised to see that you had just published this today, and its really good. I love to write, and I'm thinking of making an account. I honestly can't say that there was anything wrong with your story. I loved it. I'll be looking forward to Chapter 2! And if I do make an account, I think I'll tell you my username, because I hope you can look at my stories and give me feedback. Thanks!