for Chills4/3/2012 c10 walls-have-ears
Well, it definitely did what it was supposed to; it gave me the chills. Nice job.
The only problem I have is that despite the fact that they are short stories, disregarding the poems, there isn't that much characterisation involved, like in the witch story, you didn't characterise the main characters enough, but to compensate for all that, he stories were spooky so well done!
Well, it definitely did what it was supposed to; it gave me the chills. Nice job.
The only problem I have is that despite the fact that they are short stories, disregarding the poems, there isn't that much characterisation involved, like in the witch story, you didn't characterise the main characters enough, but to compensate for all that, he stories were spooky so well done!
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