
7/19/2015 c1
9TotoDaDog
Whoa, this is good, and really sad. I felt so bad the whole time for her, with her abusive dad and dead mother. Definitely didn't expect her to be the one who kills her. Didn't expect any of it, really. It was still really good.
I loved it. I cried though. It was very good.
Peace, Toto

Whoa, this is good, and really sad. I felt so bad the whole time for her, with her abusive dad and dead mother. Definitely didn't expect her to be the one who kills her. Didn't expect any of it, really. It was still really good.
I loved it. I cried though. It was very good.
Peace, Toto
3/30/2013 c1 thetaleofthetwo
Hi, there - I really enjoyed reading this story and I thought it was pretty interesting, too. The only spelling mistake I've seen is in this sentence: "Of course he'll be apart of mines", where mines should be mine. Very impressive.
I would like you to review the only story in my account, if ever you have the time. Thank you! :D
Delilah. :D
Hi, there - I really enjoyed reading this story and I thought it was pretty interesting, too. The only spelling mistake I've seen is in this sentence: "Of course he'll be apart of mines", where mines should be mine. Very impressive.
I would like you to review the only story in my account, if ever you have the time. Thank you! :D
Delilah. :D