for The moon haiku5/14/2012 c1 John 8.36
This is perfect. Love the feeling it evokes in me. I've always loved the night (obviously, since I am writing this review @ 1:30AM)! This haiku gives me that feeling I get when it is quiet and still, and the night kind of "holds you," you know? Very cool, Shauni!
This is perfect. Love the feeling it evokes in me. I've always loved the night (obviously, since I am writing this review @ 1:30AM)! This haiku gives me that feeling I get when it is quiet and still, and the night kind of "holds you," you know? Very cool, Shauni!
3/28/2012 c1 
33Chameleon81
Very nice! The ending line is terrific. It really has great feel to it. I enjoyed it much and think it's really fine work.
33Chameleon81Very nice! The ending line is terrific. It really has great feel to it. I enjoyed it much and think it's really fine work.
3/26/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
It was so simple, yet you have to love it and the creativity you used~! Great job. Keep it up ^.^
15Natari MirumuraIt was so simple, yet you have to love it and the creativity you used~! Great job. Keep it up ^.^
3/26/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
Simple yet amazing. I love the adding of the wolves too it, it gives it that extra feeling.
16Meadow FrostSimple yet amazing. I love the adding of the wolves too it, it gives it that extra feeling.
3/16/2012 c1 2dreamface
I agree with what the first reviewer said about the wolves, I think that imagery stands out. Plus, the way the first and second lines are written, it makes it clear that the moon described is a full moon, round, bright, and drawing the wolves to it and compelling them to howl. Lastly, I felt that it was interesting how you break out of the traditional mold of haikus, because usually the structure is 17 syllables broken into 5-7-5, then again, I don't know if people on this site care much either ways, if so, disregard that last comment, I don't write much haikus anyways.
2dreamfaceI agree with what the first reviewer said about the wolves, I think that imagery stands out. Plus, the way the first and second lines are written, it makes it clear that the moon described is a full moon, round, bright, and drawing the wolves to it and compelling them to howl. Lastly, I felt that it was interesting how you break out of the traditional mold of haikus, because usually the structure is 17 syllables broken into 5-7-5, then again, I don't know if people on this site care much either ways, if so, disregard that last comment, I don't write much haikus anyways.
2/29/2012 c1 1444musicfreak44
This was good. I liked how you brought in the part with the wolves, the creatures of the moon and night. :)
1444musicfreak44This was good. I liked how you brought in the part with the wolves, the creatures of the moon and night. :)