for The Day of the Dead4/26/2015 c1 
2Rachel032687
If this is the first and last you plan to pen, you have done justice to the genre
2Rachel032687If this is the first and last you plan to pen, you have done justice to the genre
1/10/2015 c1 15RaisingDad
I wrote one zombie story (Zombie Ghadaffi) and I began it with: "When Hell is full, the dead will walk the Earth." But it never occurred to write it in verse. I bow to your brilliance.
15RaisingDadI wrote one zombie story (Zombie Ghadaffi) and I began it with: "When Hell is full, the dead will walk the Earth." But it never occurred to write it in verse. I bow to your brilliance.
9/2/2014 c1 4ImmanenceEnsured
It's awesome x) gosh, your zombie apocalypse is DARK! Which isn't too surprising, but this actually made me feel a bit sad instead of zombie-excited.
4ImmanenceEnsuredIt's awesome x) gosh, your zombie apocalypse is DARK! Which isn't too surprising, but this actually made me feel a bit sad instead of zombie-excited.
3/16/2014 c1 15Fairyfinder
Um, okay then. Very gory, but the rhythm was enjoyable (I do so love rhymes). I have never read a poem about zombies before, but this was interesting. You do know the Day of the Dead, or la Día de Los Muertos, is a Mexican holiday, right? I'm not putting you down or anything, I'm just saying. Good poem in all, it was entertaining and that's what matters, right? Hope to see some more poems like this (maybe less violent)! Good job! :)
15FairyfinderUm, okay then. Very gory, but the rhythm was enjoyable (I do so love rhymes). I have never read a poem about zombies before, but this was interesting. You do know the Day of the Dead, or la Día de Los Muertos, is a Mexican holiday, right? I'm not putting you down or anything, I'm just saying. Good poem in all, it was entertaining and that's what matters, right? Hope to see some more poems like this (maybe less violent)! Good job! :)
2/27/2014 c1 66J.M. Black
It's short, to the point, and very well written.
I'm not one for poetry, but I am one for zombies, and I really like what you did here.
Keep writing!
66J.M. BlackIt's short, to the point, and very well written.
I'm not one for poetry, but I am one for zombies, and I really like what you did here.
Keep writing!
9/12/2013 c1 31HeroofEnelios
I really, really like this piece. It's well written, the descriptions are quite good and, I must say, sent some shivers down my spine and overall it is great. Awesome work here!
31HeroofEneliosI really, really like this piece. It's well written, the descriptions are quite good and, I must say, sent some shivers down my spine and overall it is great. Awesome work here!
9/4/2013 c1 xxxyx
Some of the syllables sounded a little bit awkward, but, meh. Who cares? It has zombies.
And that 'all rights reserved' at the end. :P Was a nice touch.
Ps. 25 reviews for 93 words... that's 4 words per review!
Some of the syllables sounded a little bit awkward, but, meh. Who cares? It has zombies.
And that 'all rights reserved' at the end. :P Was a nice touch.
Ps. 25 reviews for 93 words... that's 4 words per review!
1/6/2013 c1 13Revamp
This was a very good poem. I like how this poem in particular tells a story of sorts. and your rhyme scheme is wonderful. I hope to see more poems from you.
13RevampThis was a very good poem. I like how this poem in particular tells a story of sorts. and your rhyme scheme is wonderful. I hope to see more poems from you.
12/14/2012 c1 70Naver
That was funny and slightly creepy cool all the same. Continue to write. :)
Random note: You knew I couldn't resist a don't review.. sorry"
70NaverThat was funny and slightly creepy cool all the same. Continue to write. :)
Random note: You knew I couldn't resist a don't review.. sorry"
12/13/2012 c1 8PoisonedElysium
Both amusing and chilling, I'm giggling and checking out the window for zombies! (By-the-by, the 'All rights reserved' isn't part of the poem but making a claim to it?) But seriously it's a lovely poem, only maybe it could read 'corpses' to put it in the plural? :)
8PoisonedElysiumBoth amusing and chilling, I'm giggling and checking out the window for zombies! (By-the-by, the 'All rights reserved' isn't part of the poem but making a claim to it?) But seriously it's a lovely poem, only maybe it could read 'corpses' to put it in the plural? :)