
4/1/2012 c8 Alice Rosezella
Okay sooo Kai is a doctor and Axial is an angel! :) This just keeps getting better! :D
Okay sooo Kai is a doctor and Axial is an angel! :) This just keeps getting better! :D
3/24/2012 c7 Azure Raven Sky
Awesome can't wait for d next chapter by the wat is Majolica living with jack?
Awesome can't wait for d next chapter by the wat is Majolica living with jack?
3/18/2012 c5 Alice Rosezella
Kai keeps getting weirder by the second I can't wait for the next chapter!
Kai keeps getting weirder by the second I can't wait for the next chapter!
3/15/2012 c4
2InfatuatedCritic
... Ash acts a lot like me. It's kind of scary. xD
Otherwise, great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

... Ash acts a lot like me. It's kind of scary. xD
Otherwise, great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
3/13/2012 c3 Alice Rosezella
Jack is getting on my nerves, but it's okay because Ash is AWESOME! I can't wait for school! ...Ugh that last statment sounded disgusting, but this school sounds interesting...
Jack is getting on my nerves, but it's okay because Ash is AWESOME! I can't wait for school! ...Ugh that last statment sounded disgusting, but this school sounds interesting...
3/11/2012 c2 InfatuatedCritic
Interesting story, but it feels a bit rushed in places.
I caught one minor typo while reading:
"Fay? Axial? Diner is served!"
'Diner' should be 'dinner'.
Interesting story, but it feels a bit rushed in places.
I caught one minor typo while reading:
"Fay? Axial? Diner is served!"
'Diner' should be 'dinner'.
3/11/2012 c2
4Rebel Maru
have you, by chance, read the familiar of Zero? It seems to be similar to this in many ways... could just be a coincidence, though. Great story, update soon please!

have you, by chance, read the familiar of Zero? It seems to be similar to this in many ways... could just be a coincidence, though. Great story, update soon please!
3/8/2012 c2
8Tsuki no Usagi to Umi no Zou
I'm lovin' that wand! This is awesome and the pelf berry sounds delicious :)

I'm lovin' that wand! This is awesome and the pelf berry sounds delicious :)