for Old Butterflies6/26/2014 c1 Guest
Nice story...it was alot fun.
Nice story...it was alot fun.
8/1/2013 c1 Artly
This is so erotic! I love it. I really liked how the two characters vibed like no time had passed. It had just enough backstory to make it believable and entertaining. Well done.
This is so erotic! I love it. I really liked how the two characters vibed like no time had passed. It had just enough backstory to make it believable and entertaining. Well done.
8/5/2012 c1 ReaderMarz
I am so thrilled to have stumbled across this story! So very sexy, and plausible to boot. Thank you for sharing your marvelous talents!
I am so thrilled to have stumbled across this story! So very sexy, and plausible to boot. Thank you for sharing your marvelous talents!
5/30/2012 c1 beans13
Man you shoulda totally make this into a chapter story! Loved it :)
Man you shoulda totally make this into a chapter story! Loved it :)
3/13/2012 c1 Guest
Wow
Wow
3/13/2012 c1 Guest
Wow
Wow
3/11/2012 c1 
50Diztracshon
This site is too much like deviantart for me, everything I find makes me feel inferior. This is incredible, as is everything of yours that I have read.
50DiztracshonThis site is too much like deviantart for me, everything I find makes me feel inferior. This is incredible, as is everything of yours that I have read.
3/6/2012 c1 Lizray
Omg this was truly an awesome Oneshot! My favorite line was the last one "Read any good books lately" haha awesome writing skills thanks for sharing your creativity.
Omg this was truly an awesome Oneshot! My favorite line was the last one "Read any good books lately" haha awesome writing skills thanks for sharing your creativity.
3/3/2012 c1 berndi
Uhhhhhhhhhhhh, why is this so good?
Seriously, as always, the emotions you invoke and the dialogue you write are just fantastic. I felt just as frantic as Isabel, just as overjoyed, just as everything. It was great.
Of course, I'd love more :P But that's hardly a criticism.
Uhhhhhhhhhhhh, why is this so good?
Seriously, as always, the emotions you invoke and the dialogue you write are just fantastic. I felt just as frantic as Isabel, just as overjoyed, just as everything. It was great.
Of course, I'd love more :P But that's hardly a criticism.