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3/12/2012 c2 Labina
This was really great! I liked the word choice.

For example: 'imminent' instead of 'coming'.

The way you described the characters was also very excellent.

I don't know if Elementary kids are in the same school as High School kids where you live, but not where I live, so I was a bit confused there.

The grammar was WONDERFUL! -I'm a huge grammar freak, haha. :)

Keep on going with this story, I like it!

3/7/2012 c1 1FangFreakingBleah
a pretty good start. I like your style it's really great. Just need more info of what ur story is about! And yesss im the first reviewer! :D

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