for Wolves12/13/2012 c1 839538
Not so good at poetry reviews :/ but what I like about this is its descriptive nature and the lyrical flow. You could probably improve on your vocabulary a bit, just to keep it flowing better. Nice work.
Not so good at poetry reviews :/ but what I like about this is its descriptive nature and the lyrical flow. You could probably improve on your vocabulary a bit, just to keep it flowing better. Nice work.
8/3/2012 c1 
23Love A Mysterious Thing
Very very lovely. This matches the maginificence of wolves spot on! I love it.
23Love A Mysterious ThingVery very lovely. This matches the maginificence of wolves spot on! I love it.
5/14/2012 c1 John 8.36
Amazing flow and imagery. This is simply wonderful! Shauni, you have the gift!
Amazing flow and imagery. This is simply wonderful! Shauni, you have the gift!
5/12/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
Very Very nice! I love the ryming. Excellent job doing so. Also, very solid format and outstnding descriptions! This poem is amazing! Keep it up .
15Natari MirumuraVery Very nice! I love the ryming. Excellent job doing so. Also, very solid format and outstnding descriptions! This poem is amazing! Keep it up .
4/19/2012 c1 4Jay T. Wolf
The imagery in this poem was easy to imagine and dang girl you can rhythm. Which is something that I have never been able to do. Very well done.
4Jay T. WolfThe imagery in this poem was easy to imagine and dang girl you can rhythm. Which is something that I have never been able to do. Very well done.
4/1/2012 c1 24Pzychotic
I really like this! Partially because I really like wolves too, but also because your imagery is really nice! I wrote a poem about wolves too, but it's not actually about wolves if you think about it ;P
24PzychoticI really like this! Partially because I really like wolves too, but also because your imagery is really nice! I wrote a poem about wolves too, but it's not actually about wolves if you think about it ;P
3/26/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
Beautifully done. Wolves are a good subject for poetry, there movements and grace are like poetry in it's self. excellent job.
16Meadow FrostBeautifully done. Wolves are a good subject for poetry, there movements and grace are like poetry in it's self. excellent job.