for Attained A Mate6/28/2012 c3 Venetiangrl92
well i like it so far! please please update soon! so can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo
well i like it so far! please please update soon! so can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo
3/12/2012 c1 
1MiseryLovedHer
I do think this storu has alot of potential and i do like the plot so far, but i do think you need to do some spell check, it should be 'scent' not 'sent', and i'm not sure what you're tryin to convey by 'theirs never one' cause it doesnt seem to make much sense to me. Ok, pls dont get me wrong, i dont mean to be completely rude, and i usually dont mind grammar errors, but not getting what 'theirs never one' means made it harder for me to understand the story.
1MiseryLovedHerI do think this storu has alot of potential and i do like the plot so far, but i do think you need to do some spell check, it should be 'scent' not 'sent', and i'm not sure what you're tryin to convey by 'theirs never one' cause it doesnt seem to make much sense to me. Ok, pls dont get me wrong, i dont mean to be completely rude, and i usually dont mind grammar errors, but not getting what 'theirs never one' means made it harder for me to understand the story.