for Greek Tales4/10/2013 c2 
13tamarkaph2013
Again, you write in past and present tense at times which is confusing...
ex: Nicias looked up and to his horror, it's a eclipse!
13tamarkaph2013Again, you write in past and present tense at times which is confusing...
ex: Nicias looked up and to his horror, it's a eclipse!
4/10/2013 c1 tamarkaph2013
I think your opening sentence is written in both past and present tense which makes it confusing to the reader. The second seems kind of wordy.
I think your opening sentence is written in both past and present tense which makes it confusing to the reader. The second seems kind of wordy.