for An Unscheduled Love12/26/2013 c1 snow29dove
Wow amazing story. You have a fan for life! I so admire your writing and ware stories. They make me feel like I am in there with the characters. Can't wait for more. Xoxo
Wow amazing story. You have a fan for life! I so admire your writing and ware stories. They make me feel like I am in there with the characters. Can't wait for more. Xoxo
3/25/2012 c1 Bridgie979
This is spectacular! I thoroughly enjoyed it. You did a terrific job. :-) Thank you for posting it.
This is spectacular! I thoroughly enjoyed it. You did a terrific job. :-) Thank you for posting it.
3/24/2012 c1 Vic
I really liked the basis of the story using guardian angels! Keep building on that! I loved the whole story until the last part in her apartment. It seemed too end to fast and kinda corny with his wings just disappearing. Maybe if there was more background or understanding.
I really liked the basis of the story using guardian angels! Keep building on that! I loved the whole story until the last part in her apartment. It seemed too end to fast and kinda corny with his wings just disappearing. Maybe if there was more background or understanding.
3/19/2012 c1 
1Midnight113
Lovely work, I really enjoyed this Ari character and his role as guardian angel. It made their interaction more genuine and interesting, especially once she discovered who he was. I loved the last sentence too, lol. Overall, amazing story! Well done!
1Midnight113Lovely work, I really enjoyed this Ari character and his role as guardian angel. It made their interaction more genuine and interesting, especially once she discovered who he was. I loved the last sentence too, lol. Overall, amazing story! Well done!
3/18/2012 c1 Judy Langenbahn
I really enjoyed this love story Thank you Jan for another excellent story.
I really enjoyed this love story Thank you Jan for another excellent story.
3/17/2012 c1 Esther Velez
LOVELY STORY but too short...
LOVELY STORY but too short...
3/17/2012 c1 Guest
This is written beautifully, the story flows and holds you from beginning to end.
Thankyou jan.
This is written beautifully, the story flows and holds you from beginning to end.
Thankyou jan.
3/17/2012 c1 Tina Villanueva Martineau
I really like this short story...it was very sweet. God does answer prayers. =)
I really like this short story...it was very sweet. God does answer prayers. =)
3/17/2012 c1 2S.D Stevens
A nice cute short story. I am religious and do not find it in any way disrespectful or distaistful.
2S.D StevensA nice cute short story. I am religious and do not find it in any way disrespectful or distaistful.