
7/18/2012 c1
6Musicbee13
Wow, this is such a good poem, I love the line, "the thorns it shed, shall make you weep."
This is a beautiful poem, it is now one of my favorites!

Wow, this is such a good poem, I love the line, "the thorns it shed, shall make you weep."
This is a beautiful poem, it is now one of my favorites!
7/13/2012 c1 ChildCalledSilence
Nice. It took me a few reads to fully get the message you were trying to convey. Good job on working the symbolism. I have to say this though I read your profile before I started reading the poem and you are wrong dear you write marvelously.
Nice. It took me a few reads to fully get the message you were trying to convey. Good job on working the symbolism. I have to say this though I read your profile before I started reading the poem and you are wrong dear you write marvelously.
6/27/2012 c1
1Nalledia
A sweetly bittersweet poem! I absolutely adored this! I do hope to see more of this from you! Well done!:D

A sweetly bittersweet poem! I absolutely adored this! I do hope to see more of this from you! Well done!:D
6/24/2012 c1
23David Goff
I am truly amazed. Your writing skills are impressive and the subject matter surprisingly beautiful. Who says you suck at writing? Your awesome! You should definetly make a career out of this.

I am truly amazed. Your writing skills are impressive and the subject matter surprisingly beautiful. Who says you suck at writing? Your awesome! You should definetly make a career out of this.
6/22/2012 c1 Papier
Pretty! It had a very shakespearean vibe to it- it's lovely, your writing style is simple but that's what gives your poem its unique feel -
Pretty! It had a very shakespearean vibe to it- it's lovely, your writing style is simple but that's what gives your poem its unique feel -
6/11/2012 c1 Punslinger
As lovely and delicate as the rose itself, but also has the thorny strength of that flower. I'd like to find something like this growing in my garden.
As lovely and delicate as the rose itself, but also has the thorny strength of that flower. I'd like to find something like this growing in my garden.
5/27/2012 c1
25Singing A Silent Song
This was beautiful. Some of the lines were a little long, but it's still beautiful!

This was beautiful. Some of the lines were a little long, but it's still beautiful!
5/23/2012 c1 Wumbles
*sniff*
That was beautiful!
I adore the scale of this poem.
Sincerely, (oh, and yes this is an inside joke)
ILAUGHATYOUALL
*sniff*
That was beautiful!
I adore the scale of this poem.
Sincerely, (oh, and yes this is an inside joke)
ILAUGHATYOUALL