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8/23/2019 c1 belovedAeronaut
For some reason as I was reading I thought that a good summary would be "the Prince teaches Cinderella BDSM (not clickbait)"
I loved it! I've been bum-rush reading your stories here and oooooooou! I live your style of writing! It's very expressive and dare i say, explosive! Even with the shorter pieces I understand and appreciate the characters so much in the words you give!
Thank you for such an interesting story
1/25/2015 c1 steve
I forgot to add; cinderella's name was ella. Cinder couldn't be cinder all life! You should find him nice name and he wouldn't have a problem with telling it to lord
1/25/2015 c1 steve
We all saw it coming xd but it was interesting and smexy- good job!
9/26/2014 c1 Glorilian
Poor Cinder! But in the end he found his happiness.
I very very like your story. It's nicely written. :o)
8/2/2014 c1 4rockspapersnscissors
Omg... can I just take a moment and say, how much I love you right now? XD

This story was great, I really loved everything about it; however the ending was a little too 'ta-da' for the build up you worked so hard for...

Yet, everything else about Cinder- even his name- I loved! :3

I thought the idea of it was great, adding in a 'Dragon Lord' was epic; instead of the 'prince.' However, you forgot one of the main morals to the story... the retribution to the evils of the Step-mother and Step-brothers... I don't believe without that this story could be considered complete! :/

This was totally my kind of kink, I'm loving you so much for this right now! ;7

Thanks for the great read,

5/15/2014 c1 Kazu94
beautiful, simply beautiful :]
I wish there would be more stories as good as this one
12/30/2013 c1 1sunshineg9
Mmm, so interesting.
2/21/2013 c1 Carya55
That was awesome! So happy Cinder got his happy ending :)
8/4/2012 c1 2Nine-Tailed Master
This story was BEAUTIFUL! Positively AMAZING! Normally I don't have the heart to read through fics where the characters are abused but I had a feeling the Dragon Lord was going to come to the rescue in the end so I just HAD to finish it. You're a wonderful writer and I loved how easily I was drawn into the story and the unlikely plot. It was just...perfect :)
5/15/2012 c1 Anon
I liked this story up until the fairy godmother had "manicured nails."

Okay, she also has wings, and there's a dragon prince, but this is a medieval setting.

I assume medieval settings don't have salons and OPAL nail polish and nail buffers.
5/15/2012 c1 2Madame Penguin
I don't know what exactly to make of this. From just a reader's POV I love the twist to the Cinderella story by adding in the dragon twist and the prolonged balls.On an emotional level, I hate part of this because I always have a hard time getting through the rape scenes because of how helpless the main character is and how damaging such events are to the mind. I have to admit though that it adds a certain flavor to the story with all the ..."proclivities" as you call it haha. So I'm half loving and hating this story which makes it all the more interesting and a must read for those that are more experienced and mentally ready to read such stories like this.
4/11/2012 c1 mango.furomaji
This story is actually very nice. At first I thought it was one of those cliche fictions based on the fairy tale again, but the twist claims otherwise. It's a good read and I think people should really take time to read this story. Great job.. =)
3/29/2012 c1 Darla
Awww, I loved this so much. ^_^ It was a good story. At times, I wanted to stop reading, I admit. But that was cuz of Cinder's step brothers. -_- They made me really angry and disgusted. But I'm really glad Cinder got to be happy in the end. ^_^

Sorry for my short review. I really liked the story. ^_^
3/23/2012 c1 nulldefuncted
This story got far less reviews than it should, it is AWESOME. It was written well and everything was described marvelously, although I wish it had a sequel @_@

Nice job 3
3/21/2012 c1 runeruined
One word wicked. I admit it is a cliche but you gave it a nice and worth reading spin.

Kudos for original spin. Oh and welcome back. :)
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