8/5/2017 c14 13Shailaputri
I like this original version than the revised. You could have continued this instead of rewriting I think..
I like this original version than the revised. You could have continued this instead of rewriting I think..
7/12/2016 c14 7IcanzIIravor
Grrrr. Now I must go to your profile. This story is awesome. *grumbles* please keep writing!
Grrrr. Now I must go to your profile. This story is awesome. *grumbles* please keep writing!
7/12/2016 c10 IcanzIIravor
That fight scene was one of the funniest I have ever read. EVER. I am an adult male and I laughed so hard I actually started giggling. Oh man I love this girls anger management issues.
That fight scene was one of the funniest I have ever read. EVER. I am an adult male and I laughed so hard I actually started giggling. Oh man I love this girls anger management issues.
6/23/2016 c14 Guest
Well damn I'd like to read more but if you've run out of steam then oh well, I guess.
Well damn I'd like to read more but if you've run out of steam then oh well, I guess.
4/17/2016 c4 Alixah
okay, i start reading your story from tm. i absolutely loved the plot. Characters too. and i really am looking forward to your update. please make it fast. AAAAnnnnnnnnnndddddddd please start writing detailed chaps phuleeezzz.!This aint enough. :D
okay, i start reading your story from tm. i absolutely loved the plot. Characters too. and i really am looking forward to your update. please make it fast. AAAAnnnnnnnnnndddddddd please start writing detailed chaps phuleeezzz.!This aint enough. :D
1/8/2016 c13 Bookworm
This story is great. I'm totally the type that kills people with kindness but I have a full dialogue running in my head of what I really want to say, but the only people that get that version are me and my best friends when I rant later. So I absolutely love how she's just without a filter!
This story is great. I'm totally the type that kills people with kindness but I have a full dialogue running in my head of what I really want to say, but the only people that get that version are me and my best friends when I rant later. So I absolutely love how she's just without a filter!
1/6/2016 c13 Jessica
WOW I LOVE THIS STROY PLEASE UPDATE MANY CHAPTER IN THE NEXT DAY OR SO I BEG YOU
WOW I LOVE THIS STROY PLEASE UPDATE MANY CHAPTER IN THE NEXT DAY OR SO I BEG YOU
1/6/2016 c13 Rising Dawn
Just one suggestion: Couldn't Nami cry, like, real crying from exhaustion and make 'Michaels' soften? I mean, that would make things interesting from there. I hope you consider it! Thanks!
Just one suggestion: Couldn't Nami cry, like, real crying from exhaustion and make 'Michaels' soften? I mean, that would make things interesting from there. I hope you consider it! Thanks!
7/9/2015 c12 Cris
I can't. This NEEDS to be updated. Sosososo good.
I can't. This NEEDS to be updated. Sosososo good.
9/16/2014 c12 Kayla
I love this story so much! Please update soon!
I love this story so much! Please update soon!
8/9/2014 c12 Karry
Can't wait till the next chapter!
Can't wait till the next chapter!