for Boys & Detentions4/21/2012 c5 
1IcySocks
Hahaha! Running from a bee! That is totally something I would do! No literally... I like how sarcastic and witty Nami is. I feel like she is exactly like me except, I don't wear glasses and she's a little older. I can even put a face to Asshole Michael's! I know this kid who is REALLY attractive but is such a jerk! And he's a year older then me... but still. I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh yea, sorry I haven't been updating, I've been busy with my school play (I was gonna do track but, I did this instead!) I got the German speaking part and I have to memorize freaking German... but I got 3 more chapters up!
1IcySocksHahaha! Running from a bee! That is totally something I would do! No literally... I like how sarcastic and witty Nami is. I feel like she is exactly like me except, I don't wear glasses and she's a little older. I can even put a face to Asshole Michael's! I know this kid who is REALLY attractive but is such a jerk! And he's a year older then me... but still. I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh yea, sorry I haven't been updating, I've been busy with my school play (I was gonna do track but, I did this instead!) I got the German speaking part and I have to memorize freaking German... but I got 3 more chapters up!
4/21/2012 c5 littlemisstinteen
I love this. It's purely addictive and funny and silly, and I love it! SOOOO FUNNY! Well, not all the time, but Nami is a very interesting character. And Mystery Michaels is... wow. I'd say hot but that's a bit overused. He's... incredible... but typical kind of the bad-boy so far. Still, I love the way they're arguing! Can't wait for the next chapter! You're doing a great job. Good luck!
I love this. It's purely addictive and funny and silly, and I love it! SOOOO FUNNY! Well, not all the time, but Nami is a very interesting character. And Mystery Michaels is... wow. I'd say hot but that's a bit overused. He's... incredible... but typical kind of the bad-boy so far. Still, I love the way they're arguing! Can't wait for the next chapter! You're doing a great job. Good luck!
4/20/2012 c5 1GoldenBaby96
Great chapter! I love Namis mom, she's so funny. And that story about how she lost her glasses had me dieing. Just a little advice, it'd be a good idea to use some transitional symbol so that it's easier to detect the change in scenes. Update soon!
1GoldenBaby96Great chapter! I love Namis mom, she's so funny. And that story about how she lost her glasses had me dieing. Just a little advice, it'd be a good idea to use some transitional symbol so that it's easier to detect the change in scenes. Update soon!
4/16/2012 c4 hearts a heavy burden x
Wow that just went form hilarious to serious. My mind has been blown. Update soon!
Wow that just went form hilarious to serious. My mind has been blown. Update soon!
4/16/2012 c4 1xEvery.Rose.Has.It's.Thornsx
Hey awesome story, it's very amusing especially Nami's "threats" mainly cause that's the type of thing I say. Update soon :)
1xEvery.Rose.Has.It's.ThornsxHey awesome story, it's very amusing especially Nami's "threats" mainly cause that's the type of thing I say. Update soon :)
4/13/2012 c4 yelena
Oh my lord he just went all psycho on her ass! update pretttttyyy please with a cherry on top
Oh my lord he just went all psycho on her ass! update pretttttyyy please with a cherry on top
4/12/2012 c4 1GoldenBaby96
Oh oh oh! What is his problemo? He's totally twisted! First he brings her there for no apparent reason nd then wen she called him a stupid peice of sh*t, he caught feelings. Great chapter as always, update Sooon:-*
1GoldenBaby96Oh oh oh! What is his problemo? He's totally twisted! First he brings her there for no apparent reason nd then wen she called him a stupid peice of sh*t, he caught feelings. Great chapter as always, update Sooon:-*
4/12/2012 c4 sleepyloner
Oooolalala, lol, oh snap, yup I didn't see that coming but my best guess would be he had a past experience where someone told him that he's a stupid piece of shit? hehehe. ooh i cant wait for next chapter! :D
Oooolalala, lol, oh snap, yup I didn't see that coming but my best guess would be he had a past experience where someone told him that he's a stupid piece of shit? hehehe. ooh i cant wait for next chapter! :D
4/12/2012 c4 1Forlorn-ember
What the hell made him switch so quickly? To me it doesn't seem like she said anything different to what she had before.
1Forlorn-emberWhat the hell made him switch so quickly? To me it doesn't seem like she said anything different to what she had before.
4/12/2012 c4 1IcySocks
I really want to know what happens next! So exited! Like I said before in my other review for chapter 1, me and Nami have some similarities. She definitely says some bold stuff that you wouldn't expect and I love it. I feel such a strong connection to her character and it makes me so happy! And when Michael's said "It's so fun to rial you up", I started freaking out because not only my friends say that to me, but my family does too! I can't wait for the next chapter! I am going to favorite this story. :D
1IcySocksI really want to know what happens next! So exited! Like I said before in my other review for chapter 1, me and Nami have some similarities. She definitely says some bold stuff that you wouldn't expect and I love it. I feel such a strong connection to her character and it makes me so happy! And when Michael's said "It's so fun to rial you up", I started freaking out because not only my friends say that to me, but my family does too! I can't wait for the next chapter! I am going to favorite this story. :D
4/12/2012 c1 IcySocks
I really liked this chapter! Nami kind of reminds me of me... my friends say that I'm a goody-two-shoes compared to them. I feel like Nami and I share similarities like saying "bad words" in front of teachers, only I don't get a punishment.
I really liked this chapter! Nami kind of reminds me of me... my friends say that I'm a goody-two-shoes compared to them. I feel like Nami and I share similarities like saying "bad words" in front of teachers, only I don't get a punishment.
4/12/2012 c4 Translucent
Hello there. :] I really enjoy this story and how you've paced it so far. I love the characters, and I must say, Mr. Michaels sounds sexy as hell. My hypothesis as to the reasoning of his outburst is that he is/was abused by someone [father maybe?], and is sensitive to being called degrading terms like "piece of shit". So! Update soon, please, I really like it. :3
Hello there. :] I really enjoy this story and how you've paced it so far. I love the characters, and I must say, Mr. Michaels sounds sexy as hell. My hypothesis as to the reasoning of his outburst is that he is/was abused by someone [father maybe?], and is sensitive to being called degrading terms like "piece of shit". So! Update soon, please, I really like it. :3