4/10/2012 c3 Aqui
Oh my goodness! I actually love this and this chapter made me laugh. Nami threatening to beat anyone up is almost laughable and this guy, who has yet to have a name is just carrying her around :) That is genius! Update soon! Pwetty pwease with a cherry on top !
Oh my goodness! I actually love this and this chapter made me laugh. Nami threatening to beat anyone up is almost laughable and this guy, who has yet to have a name is just carrying her around :) That is genius! Update soon! Pwetty pwease with a cherry on top !
4/8/2012 c3 1GoldenBaby96
Woooohhh! I REALLY liked this chapter! It was so cute and witty. Just pretty pretty please update? It would mean the world to me:D
Woooohhh! I REALLY liked this chapter! It was so cute and witty. Just pretty pretty please update? It would mean the world to me:D
4/8/2012 c3 6Molkchan
Great story. I wonder where he took her and why doesn't she have a nose bleed from hanging upside down for so long? Important questions. ^^ Update soon.
Great story. I wonder where he took her and why doesn't she have a nose bleed from hanging upside down for so long? Important questions. ^^ Update soon.
3/25/2012 c1 Reviewer of the north
The context of this story is pretty good but can also use some work. Overall it's a nice story. -reviewer of the north
The context of this story is pretty good but can also use some work. Overall it's a nice story. -reviewer of the north
3/25/2012 c1 Guest
Lovely, you're a great writer:)
Lovely, you're a great writer:)
3/25/2012 c1 Talky Kathy
Boomshakalaka! I looooovvvvvveeeee your story! Update soon!
Boomshakalaka! I looooovvvvvveeeee your story! Update soon!
3/25/2012 c1 Chocolate kisses
I really love your story! Although I feel like its a little rushed nd that the chapters could be a little longer, I think the story line is good. Continue writing nd update soon:)
I really love your story! Although I feel like its a little rushed nd that the chapters could be a little longer, I think the story line is good. Continue writing nd update soon:)
3/23/2012 c1 1GoldenBaby96
Woo, i love this story! It's so cute and witty:D I'm surprised at how little reviews you have because this is great. I guess I found a new read, update soon:)
Woo, i love this story! It's so cute and witty:D I'm surprised at how little reviews you have because this is great. I guess I found a new read, update soon:)
3/23/2012 c2 sleepyloner
Cliche as it may sound, I LOVE IT! :D I can't wait for the next chapter! 3 :)
Cliche as it may sound, I LOVE IT! :D I can't wait for the next chapter! 3 :)
3/21/2012 c2 Hi
Love love love it!
Can't wait for more :)
Love love love it!
Can't wait for more :)