for Boys & Detentions8/1/2014 c5 Guest
Ahhh I really love this story!
Nami made me laugh so much. Especially when she flipped out on that bitch Mandy. Mandy deserved that punch and more! But seriously, Nami's attitude has me laughing out loud. And can we just take a moment to appreciate Michaels! I'm anticipating Vincents involvement in the story. Don't stop writing!
Ahhh I really love this story!
Nami made me laugh so much. Especially when she flipped out on that bitch Mandy. Mandy deserved that punch and more! But seriously, Nami's attitude has me laughing out loud. And can we just take a moment to appreciate Michaels! I'm anticipating Vincents involvement in the story. Don't stop writing!
7/21/2014 c12 holasweetie
Please continue, and hurry:-)
Please continue, and hurry:-)
7/16/2014 c12 StarBucks
Nice chapter. Can't wait for the next! :DDDDD
Nice chapter. Can't wait for the next! :DDDDD
7/15/2014 c12 Samantha
So, this is chapter 115. Interesting because I really thought we were on chapter 12. I love your story and I can't wait until you update again. 'Till then!
So, this is chapter 115. Interesting because I really thought we were on chapter 12. I love your story and I can't wait until you update again. 'Till then!
7/15/2014 c12 Guest
Love it loving the way ur goin through these updates keep it up XD
Love it loving the way ur goin through these updates keep it up XD
7/14/2014 c1 
2The Science of Fiction
This is enjoyable! I can only say, that you switched between present and past tense a few times while writing, but that's easily fixed.
2The Science of FictionThis is enjoyable! I can only say, that you switched between present and past tense a few times while writing, but that's easily fixed.
7/14/2014 c11 Guest
Ahhhha brilliant can't wait f next update XD
Ahhhha brilliant can't wait f next update XD
7/12/2014 c11 1MysteriousNerdness-07
*jaw drops*
AND YOU LEAVE US HERE?!
*puppy dog eyes* I'm begging you to update. I'll even give you a virtual cookie. (:::)
I love all of Nami's insults, mind if I use them on some brats at school?
1MysteriousNerdness-07*jaw drops*
AND YOU LEAVE US HERE?!
*puppy dog eyes* I'm begging you to update. I'll even give you a virtual cookie. (:::)
I love all of Nami's insults, mind if I use them on some brats at school?
7/11/2014 c11 kktalk123katherine
Please write more I love this book. I have not only laughed and laughed but I felt the character's anger to the point of tears coming from my own eyes.
Please write more I love this book. I have not only laughed and laughed but I felt the character's anger to the point of tears coming from my own eyes.
7/11/2014 c11 Anubis O.o
Heh, I order like the three ratcheteers do. I get a caramel crunch latte, over ice, with 3 pumps of caramel, two if vanilla, and no whipped cream. Excecpt that mine if extra fat and theirs isn't.
Oops.
Heh, I order like the three ratcheteers do. I get a caramel crunch latte, over ice, with 3 pumps of caramel, two if vanilla, and no whipped cream. Excecpt that mine if extra fat and theirs isn't.
Oops.
7/11/2014 c1 1Infernal love
Haha, sorry for being so obsessed with your story but I am reading it again. What I noticed was that I didn't know what gender she was until half-way through, and that confused me. Also, can you do some kind of physical description of Nami, because I like to imagine my characters, but I don't know what she looks like. Thank you!
1Infernal loveHaha, sorry for being so obsessed with your story but I am reading it again. What I noticed was that I didn't know what gender she was until half-way through, and that confused me. Also, can you do some kind of physical description of Nami, because I like to imagine my characters, but I don't know what she looks like. Thank you!
7/11/2014 c11 Infernal love
Please make the chapter as soon as you can? I really can't take, you left me at such a cliff-hanger, I can't deal!:'(
Please make the chapter as soon as you can? I really can't take, you left me at such a cliff-hanger, I can't deal!:'(