for Goodnight Lou7/5/2012 c2 
9Arella White
I like this a lot. You should update really soon if you want me to be happy!
9Arella WhiteI like this a lot. You should update really soon if you want me to be happy!
5/28/2012 c1 Rei Ryuugazaki
OMFG! That was so sad! I know how Meg's mother feels. My step grandmother died of leukaemia.
OMFG! That was so sad! I know how Meg's mother feels. My step grandmother died of leukaemia.
5/10/2012 c1 5JaredDean
Very touching piece. The last line sounds like this would be a great prologue into a story about the boy and what he did in his life. I think that could be a great story. A couple little typos, but otherwise well written. I enjoyed it.
5JaredDeanVery touching piece. The last line sounds like this would be a great prologue into a story about the boy and what he did in his life. I think that could be a great story. A couple little typos, but otherwise well written. I enjoyed it.
3/24/2012 c1 20physics223
Ending was a bit of a surprise, but the story is simple but pretty good. The ending could be built up more, and I know because it has been my problem as well. Overall, the story's quite solid. Hope you can also look over my new work. :)
20physics223Ending was a bit of a surprise, but the story is simple but pretty good. The ending could be built up more, and I know because it has been my problem as well. Overall, the story's quite solid. Hope you can also look over my new work. :)
3/24/2012 c1 4MysticFires
Awww this was so sweat and so very sad I loved it! I wanted to cry so bad. Sniff!
4MysticFiresAwww this was so sweat and so very sad I loved it! I wanted to cry so bad. Sniff!