for Shade, My Shadows5/18/2012 c1 
15katrrat
extremely touching. I AM FOR REAL. Nearly brought tears to my eyes. ALWAYS beautifully written and well 'performed'. This is what family should be all about!
15katrratextremely touching. I AM FOR REAL. Nearly brought tears to my eyes. ALWAYS beautifully written and well 'performed'. This is what family should be all about!
5/14/2012 c1 John 8.36
This is precious. If your folks haven't ever read this, you need to have them do so! Great job!
This is precious. If your folks haven't ever read this, you need to have them do so! Great job!
5/12/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
Very nice. Only 3 mistakes, but this poem is good. The format is solid, so it pulled through all the way. Keep it up .
15Natari MirumuraVery nice. Only 3 mistakes, but this poem is good. The format is solid, so it pulled through all the way. Keep it up .
4/19/2012 c1 4Jay T. Wolf
Cute. I love how, in the beginning, the shades and shadows make the work see like a sad one but later one finds out in that the shadows are actually something loved and good. Beautifully executed.
Jay T. Wolf
4Jay T. WolfCute. I love how, in the beginning, the shades and shadows make the work see like a sad one but later one finds out in that the shadows are actually something loved and good. Beautifully executed.
Jay T. Wolf
3/26/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
really good. I find a lot of poetry on here that people say that they hate there parents and stuff so this was rather refreshing to me. wonderfully done.
16Meadow Frostreally good. I find a lot of poetry on here that people say that they hate there parents and stuff so this was rather refreshing to me. wonderfully done.
3/26/2012 c1 1H0ld1ngH0p3
That's beautiful! I've read a lot of poems where the writers seem to be crucifying their parents; your poem is a nice change of pace.
1H0ld1ngH0p3That's beautiful! I've read a lot of poems where the writers seem to be crucifying their parents; your poem is a nice change of pace.
3/24/2012 c1 336TheGlycoprotein
Ooh, that took an odd little turn at the end - I expected the shadows to signify something much more malignant than your parents. I got to the end and saw it in a totally different light from how I initially read it. I like the word choice and the metaphor - as I say, very cleverly done to change it right at the end :)
336TheGlycoproteinOoh, that took an odd little turn at the end - I expected the shadows to signify something much more malignant than your parents. I got to the end and saw it in a totally different light from how I initially read it. I like the word choice and the metaphor - as I say, very cleverly done to change it right at the end :)