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10/12/2018 c15 Guest
Honestly it's quite rudeeee immoral of you to put this story under completed when it isn't. The word hiatus exists for a reason ya know? I would have like the story a lot better if you'd had the courtesy of letting me know it wasn't finished. Now I'm just left with a bitter after taste.
1/26/2017 c15 Charchar777
please update this story !
11/10/2015 c15 crazydaisyyy
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11/4/2015 c3 Guest
You write super. It's your punctuation that I worry about. But I feel reluctant to call you up on it, because it's the lack of proper punctuation that's allowing you to achieve a flow I seldom see. For eg,

I shrugged, "Is that normal?" (This is a made-up line, but uses similar punctuation you use.)

This is incorrect.
It should be:

I shrugged. "Is that normal?"
No commas before dialogue, unless it's a word related to speech. Shrugged isn't a speech word, it's a verb or action word.

But yet, when you phrased it with that incorrect punctuation, it just has a better flow, you know? Comma momentary pause. Period significant pause. The difference between reading a sentence constructed with commas and periods is huge, and changes the flow. However, if you were to publish this, a good editor will call you up on this.
11/1/2015 c1 voidxtiles
I read this before, but can't quite recall the whole plot and the ending. Was this finished before and did you take the rest down? I remember it being a great story and I want to read it again. Please put the rest back up.
9/9/2015 c15 Ann Wildsworth
This is my first time reading this story, and as I got closer to the last few chapters, I realized that the whole story wasn't up.
Maaaaan I'm heartbroken now.
Please keep us updated. I hope I can read this as a published story someday. Or just read it.
You are a talented author and I adored your story, so far.
8/31/2015 c15 1jvwalton
This breaks my heart. I love coming back to this story and reading it over and over. It makes my heart happy. I'll miss you Crystal and Jake! Until we meet again!
8/30/2015 c15 Imaginary Girl xox
Please, please, please continue this! You just can't leave people hanging like that!
8/26/2015 c15 Lexie.Loo
Damn was wondering why I kept getting an 'author is updating chapters' message the other day when I was trying to finish the story, now it looks like I can't :( Certainly not my first time reading it, but can't quite recall how it wraps up :( happy you're getting it published though, just hope it comes out soon.
3/4/2015 c54 2Ophelia Lake
OMG...Seriously the best. Seriously! You rock. And I love Jake.
3/3/2015 c39 Ophelia Lake
But I don't want to like Marcus...
3/3/2015 c37 Ophelia Lake
Yes. I would buy it! Totally.
3/3/2015 c36 Ophelia Lake
Now... You just need Jake. I imagine he isn't going to see it as Crystal loving him enough to let him go...bet he's going to be pretty upset...
3/3/2015 c27 Ophelia Lake
Ohh My God...
Yes, I knew it! (Fist bump for your awesomeness ). Now tell Jake to wake his lazy butt up! His family needs him. Awwwwwwwwwww
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