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1PrincessD8
I know why she doesn't want him to go. It's so obvious. She wants him and she LOVES him!
1PrincessD8I know why she doesn't want him to go. It's so obvious. She wants him and she LOVES him!
10/16/2012 c10 PrincessD8
I love your story. I can't think of a better summary. It is fabulous. Anyway, back to my review, for this chapter anyway. His mom is a doll! I love her! You made such a good character there, and I love how he and his mother are with one another. Also, I'm so sad that he's going to NY. I hope that he changes his mind or something. I want them to be together so badly! Great story so far!
I love your story. I can't think of a better summary. It is fabulous. Anyway, back to my review, for this chapter anyway. His mom is a doll! I love her! You made such a good character there, and I love how he and his mother are with one another. Also, I'm so sad that he's going to NY. I hope that he changes his mind or something. I want them to be together so badly! Great story so far!
10/16/2012 c8 PrincessD8
Oh my god! I'm absolutely speechless. I absolutely loved where this chapter went, however, I don't want them to just be friends. I want them to be together. Holy crap I think I'm crying. You really know how to write. Seriously. Great great chapter! Please please tell me I don't have to wait forever for them to realize that they love each other! :-P
Oh my god! I'm absolutely speechless. I absolutely loved where this chapter went, however, I don't want them to just be friends. I want them to be together. Holy crap I think I'm crying. You really know how to write. Seriously. Great great chapter! Please please tell me I don't have to wait forever for them to realize that they love each other! :-P
10/16/2012 c6 PrincessD8
I LOVE JAKE! I want them to be together. Really hope I don't have to wait too much longer! They are so cute together!
I LOVE JAKE! I want them to be together. Really hope I don't have to wait too much longer! They are so cute together!
10/15/2012 c55 Lv2read2much
Absolutely fantastic read. You had me reading this pretty much all in one sitting cause I just had to get to the end;)! Of course that prologue teaser has me in a spin. Bravo to you-can't wait to see what you come up with!
Absolutely fantastic read. You had me reading this pretty much all in one sitting cause I just had to get to the end;)! Of course that prologue teaser has me in a spin. Bravo to you-can't wait to see what you come up with!
10/15/2012 c3 PrincessD8
I'm starting to really like Jacob. He seems to have a lot of different sides to him, and I always find that good about characters. I hate it when they are just too sweet, and that's all there is to them. Good job. :-)
I'm starting to really like Jacob. He seems to have a lot of different sides to him, and I always find that good about characters. I hate it when they are just too sweet, and that's all there is to them. Good job. :-)
10/15/2012 c57 5Blueyes57
Wow. Great story. Congrats on the award. I hope you continue the sequel please? lol Trying to figure out if I should tag this story for updates or you in general for the updates of the sequel. I like the name of the story and if you plan on taking it from where the prologue of this sequel is hinting at, I think it would fit it perfectly. From the beginning when they were "kids" to where ever you're taking them.
5Blueyes57Wow. Great story. Congrats on the award. I hope you continue the sequel please? lol Trying to figure out if I should tag this story for updates or you in general for the updates of the sequel. I like the name of the story and if you plan on taking it from where the prologue of this sequel is hinting at, I think it would fit it perfectly. From the beginning when they were "kids" to where ever you're taking them.
10/15/2012 c2 1PrincessD8
Hello. I have just finished chapter 2 and I must say, I find it pretty interesting so far. Through my searching this site over the past couple days, I had passed it a few times, read the summary, and thought that it might not be for me. However, after reading the first two chapters, it has definitely caught my attention and I cannot wait to read more. Oh and the summary thing that you mentioned, you know having to be so short, I know how that is. When I just started writing my first story on here, I hated that. Can't wait to read on and I'll definitely be reviewing because, as a writer, I know how good feedback can be, whether it is good or bad. :-)
1PrincessD8Hello. I have just finished chapter 2 and I must say, I find it pretty interesting so far. Through my searching this site over the past couple days, I had passed it a few times, read the summary, and thought that it might not be for me. However, after reading the first two chapters, it has definitely caught my attention and I cannot wait to read more. Oh and the summary thing that you mentioned, you know having to be so short, I know how that is. When I just started writing my first story on here, I hated that. Can't wait to read on and I'll definitely be reviewing because, as a writer, I know how good feedback can be, whether it is good or bad. :-)
10/13/2012 c27 Kiya
I'm so happy right now. I'm like, giddy as in bouncing in my seat, ear to ear smile happy. At first I know I was saying the abortion was the right thing to do and she went about it the right way. But that was my rtional side not my opinion or my feelings. Now my feelings are involved and all I can feel is happiness now that I know she's still pregnant. I had actually thought that she might do this but as I read you didn't really hint about her still being pregnant all that much so I just assumed she really aborted it. I couldn't figure out the story would go on if she didn't have the baby but I knew you would figure something out. I like that you're keeping me on my toes.
I'm so happy right now. I'm like, giddy as in bouncing in my seat, ear to ear smile happy. At first I know I was saying the abortion was the right thing to do and she went about it the right way. But that was my rtional side not my opinion or my feelings. Now my feelings are involved and all I can feel is happiness now that I know she's still pregnant. I had actually thought that she might do this but as I read you didn't really hint about her still being pregnant all that much so I just assumed she really aborted it. I couldn't figure out the story would go on if she didn't have the baby but I knew you would figure something out. I like that you're keeping me on my toes.
10/13/2012 c17 Kiya
I love crystal right now. Even though I think that abortion is wrong the way that she went about it is so 's completl sure of her decision and it's a rational decision. But, what I'm wondering now is, if they don't have the baby how is the story going to go on? We're no where near finishedso now what?
I love crystal right now. Even though I think that abortion is wrong the way that she went about it is so 's completl sure of her decision and it's a rational decision. But, what I'm wondering now is, if they don't have the baby how is the story going to go on? We're no where near finishedso now what?
10/12/2012 c14 Kiya
Oh My Gosh! I knew that too! I knew it was coming. Even though I've been predicting everything correctly in this story, knowing that I still have 43 chapters left in this story and I have no idea what's coming up next makes me want to finish this whole story tonight. But, since I obviously can't I'll just read as much as I can before I fall asleep. This story is great so far.
Oh My Gosh! I knew that too! I knew it was coming. Even though I've been predicting everything correctly in this story, knowing that I still have 43 chapters left in this story and I have no idea what's coming up next makes me want to finish this whole story tonight. But, since I obviously can't I'll just read as much as I can before I fall asleep. This story is great so far.
10/12/2012 c13 Kiya
I new this was a dream as soon as I started to read this. But, around the middle the writing made me start to doubt myself. I thought the dream would end earlier but I did love this chapter though.
I new this was a dream as soon as I started to read this. But, around the middle the writing made me start to doubt myself. I thought the dream would end earlier but I did love this chapter though.
10/12/2012 c55 Bekah
I've literally spent all day reading this story and I absolutely love it! I'm not sure how I came across it but I'm so happy I did! Excellent job! :)
I've literally spent all day reading this story and I absolutely love it! I'm not sure how I came across it but I'm so happy I did! Excellent job! :)
10/12/2012 c57 5Lionblaze and Jayfeather
I have to say that I have missed those two, and your beautiful writing. It's just so well described and yet, not too described. You're really talent ice and I really do hope to read more of this sequel.
5Lionblaze and JayfeatherI have to say that I have missed those two, and your beautiful writing. It's just so well described and yet, not too described. You're really talent ice and I really do hope to read more of this sequel.