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5/16/2012 c10 1LadyBalacenia
:D ooh, he's going!
5/16/2012 c10 10peopleinducenausea
How can he be leaving! -.- Not happy.

I'm still incredulous that this story isn't wildly popular, with a massive amount of reviews. It is so strange. :P Maybe you could beef up your summary, make it seem more dramatic and appealing. I don't know if that would help, but it might! :D

I'll be reading!
5/13/2012 c9 angelc18
That was really well written, and I cant wait to read more.

Although, I cant believe they decided to just be friends :/

*sigh* Hopefully things will change in the near future! :D
5/11/2012 c9 1LadyBalacenia
Gorgeous! Beautiful! So sweet! Love it!

And the lemon was one of the best I've read :)
5/11/2012 c9 FreyaLuell
MORE MORE MORE! Love this story, you write with such emotion and i can really feel the tension and unanswered questions lingering around jake and crystal. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
5/11/2012 c9 10peopleinducenausea
Great, as usual. I love this story so much. I feel like I've stumbled onto a gem, really. These characters are so raw, just the way I like them. Keep up the good work. It isn't often that you find such a story.
5/8/2012 c8 FreyaLuell

Really loved it, perfectly written. Cannot wait to read what happens next.


This is the reason why, when i search for new stories on FP, i look for completed ones...
5/8/2012 c1 peopleinducenausea
There is great emotional/interpersonal detail in this story - the kind of detail that forces the readers into feeling for the main characters. That's a terrific quality in writing. Don't give up on this one! I'll be waiting/watching for the next installment.

5/8/2012 c8 angelc18
That chapter was sooooooo good :D

Poor Jake. Poor Crystal.

And Cystal...DONT let him get away!

I cant wait to read more- this is simply amazing :)

xoxo, Suze
5/7/2012 c8 EverAfterGirl
This chapter was really good! I can't wait to read what happens next!
5/7/2012 c8 godislove
that was.. AMAZING. :o I'm still in shock! Girl, you did a PERFECT job on this chapter, and i LOVED the surprise, i kinda dislike when authors warn you about what's gonna happen, that's just like basically telling the story!

Anyways, are you gonna have this story span on for a LONG time, please please please, the story's on here are TOO short :(

I CAN'T wait for your next update, you did beautifully. [:
5/3/2012 c7 angelc18
This was a good update. I think it was nice to see some of her thoughts when she was alone.

Post more soon, because although I loved this, it isnt nearly enough to satisfy, and I need more Jake! :D

xoxo, Suze
5/2/2012 c7 EverAfterGirl
Ooh. A cliffy. Can't wait to read more!
4/25/2012 c6 angelc18
That chapter was beautiful. I felt as if I was right there with them, and they are both really growing on me already.

I hope you update soon. I could read this all day :D

P.S. I dont think you'd even need much editing if this were to become a published novel one day. The quality of your writing is pretty fantastic ;)

xoxo, Suze
4/19/2012 c5 angelc18
Wow, this story is amazingly written and really entertaining!

I love Jake and Crystal and cant wait to read more about them, especially what happens at the beach :D

Pleaseee update soon- you officially have a permanent obsessive fan :P

xoxo, Suze
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