
4/18/2012 c5 godislove
THIS IS AMAZING, MORE MORE MORE. 3 You have such an perfect writing style, you really know how to get everything out. :D
Can't wait for the next update!
THIS IS AMAZING, MORE MORE MORE. 3 You have such an perfect writing style, you really know how to get everything out. :D
Can't wait for the next update!
4/16/2012 c4 vividcat00
i love this! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
i love this! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
4/12/2012 c4 Translucent
Hello there. :] I really like your story, how you made it so realistic. I can't wait for you to post chapter five, it's very enjoyable to read.
Hello there. :] I really like your story, how you made it so realistic. I can't wait for you to post chapter five, it's very enjoyable to read.
3/30/2012 c3 godislove
I think your doing an amazing job, i love how your portraying the characters, so we can really get to know the, i always look for that in stories, i want to feel as if i'm actually in the story, you know ?
Other than that, i think your doing amazing, i mean we all know where this is going right ? 3 Or maybe there'll be suspense, who knows ;D I can't wait to find out.
I think your doing an amazing job, i love how your portraying the characters, so we can really get to know the, i always look for that in stories, i want to feel as if i'm actually in the story, you know ?
Other than that, i think your doing amazing, i mean we all know where this is going right ? 3 Or maybe there'll be suspense, who knows ;D I can't wait to find out.
3/30/2012 c3 EverAfterGirl
So, I'm confused. Are Jake and Crystal in college or high school? That's my only question. The story is still really good.
So, I'm confused. Are Jake and Crystal in college or high school? That's my only question. The story is still really good.
3/26/2012 c2 foxyricanlady
Great start. I really like what you've posted already but I hope get a little more as to why they didn't like each other before please update soon
Great start. I really like what you've posted already but I hope get a little more as to why they didn't like each other before please update soon
3/26/2012 c2 godislove
Amazing chapter, you really know how to captivate your readers into wanting more. I'd say you ARE doing perfect, really [:
I wish more people would review this, i'm like the only one, Lmao.
Amazing chapter, you really know how to captivate your readers into wanting more. I'd say you ARE doing perfect, really [:
I wish more people would review this, i'm like the only one, Lmao.
3/25/2012 c1 godislove
I LOVE this, you don't know how long I've been dying to read a good well written story.. and now I've found one. :D
You have amazing writing skills, and that's what i always look for when finding a good captivating story to read.
Can't wait for the next chapter. [:
I LOVE this, you don't know how long I've been dying to read a good well written story.. and now I've found one. :D
You have amazing writing skills, and that's what i always look for when finding a good captivating story to read.
Can't wait for the next chapter. [: