11/24/2019 c1 Guest
Wooohooo loved it so much I loved how the characters are so smoothly introduced and how you set the chemistry on track perfectly great work
Wooohooo loved it so much I loved how the characters are so smoothly introduced and how you set the chemistry on track perfectly great work
1/5/2013 c1 julia
Great :) I like that you place the story at an ordinary place, it makes it stand out from all those stories taking place at parties etc (not that there's anything wrong with those stories :))
Great :) I like that you place the story at an ordinary place, it makes it stand out from all those stories taking place at parties etc (not that there's anything wrong with those stories :))
7/5/2012 c1 3starlit x sky
I loved this, it was different - in a good way, of course! Really cute. :)
I loved this, it was different - in a good way, of course! Really cute. :)
7/5/2012 c1 Guest
I loved this! It was so funny and really sweet! Brilliant.
I loved this! It was so funny and really sweet! Brilliant.
5/5/2012 c1 10CampDreamer
Tee hee hee. Sorry, had to say that. Felt the need.
Anyways, this story is just... Phenominal. I'm jealous. Mindblowingly jealous. You're just so... TALENTED.
Haha I'm quite gushy, but hey, that's how I feel at the moment. Your descriptions of blurry lights helped me see a whole new side to the pains (although I don't personally experience them) of not having clear vision.
This story just captured me. I'm supposed to be writing an essay right now, but I won't start until I get through all of your stories, and probably favorite all of them as I am about to for this one right... Now.
:) Thanks for posting, glad I clicked the "View Story" button to have such an eye opening experience with this.
-CD
Tee hee hee. Sorry, had to say that. Felt the need.
Anyways, this story is just... Phenominal. I'm jealous. Mindblowingly jealous. You're just so... TALENTED.
Haha I'm quite gushy, but hey, that's how I feel at the moment. Your descriptions of blurry lights helped me see a whole new side to the pains (although I don't personally experience them) of not having clear vision.
This story just captured me. I'm supposed to be writing an essay right now, but I won't start until I get through all of your stories, and probably favorite all of them as I am about to for this one right... Now.
:) Thanks for posting, glad I clicked the "View Story" button to have such an eye opening experience with this.
-CD
4/10/2012 c1 bells-mannequin
This was such a cute story. I loved it.
Also, about the near-sightedness? I know exactly what you mean. For example, I remember Las Vegas only as blurred images, pretty lights, and very hot days because by glasses broke during the trip. It kinda is like being on some drugs, I imagine xD
This was such a cute story. I loved it.
Also, about the near-sightedness? I know exactly what you mean. For example, I remember Las Vegas only as blurred images, pretty lights, and very hot days because by glasses broke during the trip. It kinda is like being on some drugs, I imagine xD
4/9/2012 c1 Acrimony27
Brilliant. Absolutely freaking perfect. I was about to spew a whole load of other useless nonsense but I think my first two (masterpiece) sentences do the job nicely.
Brilliant. Absolutely freaking perfect. I was about to spew a whole load of other useless nonsense but I think my first two (masterpiece) sentences do the job nicely.
4/2/2012 c1 xcathy
I like the idea about her being visually impaired. It really does get annoying sometimes. I find it cute how she kissed him all those times, making excuses for it. Spontaneous job! :D
I like the idea about her being visually impaired. It really does get annoying sometimes. I find it cute how she kissed him all those times, making excuses for it. Spontaneous job! :D