
6/14/2012 c1
10Aerith Rei
This was very sweet and genuine. I loved the rhythm and rhyme to it and thought that it was very insightful!

This was very sweet and genuine. I loved the rhythm and rhyme to it and thought that it was very insightful!
6/9/2012 c1
17RainySunnyEnding
I like it - you really got to the bottom of what it feels like to love someone. I'm notsually a fan of rhyming poems as they feel, to me, slightly childish. I'm afraid this isn't an exception, but it doesn't sound as childish as rhyme can do, so good job!

I like it - you really got to the bottom of what it feels like to love someone. I'm notsually a fan of rhyming poems as they feel, to me, slightly childish. I'm afraid this isn't an exception, but it doesn't sound as childish as rhyme can do, so good job!
6/7/2012 c1
7MoonstoneRoses
your poems definately hold alot of emotion in them, and thats hard to find sometimes. :)))

your poems definately hold alot of emotion in them, and thats hard to find sometimes. :)))
4/6/2012 c1
1Nalledia
I really like this. Your work is emotive, and can really move people. I know i definately feel what you felt - or at least something similar - when you wrote this. The best poetry comes from the heart, and this is definately it.:) Keep it up, you're truly gifted.

I really like this. Your work is emotive, and can really move people. I know i definately feel what you felt - or at least something similar - when you wrote this. The best poetry comes from the heart, and this is definately it.:) Keep it up, you're truly gifted.
4/5/2012 c1
140magicanimegurl
This is beautiful and heartfelt! I agree wholeheartedly in this poem. Love is such a powerful thing but one can't truly understand til you go through it themselves! ;)

This is beautiful and heartfelt! I agree wholeheartedly in this poem. Love is such a powerful thing but one can't truly understand til you go through it themselves! ;)
3/25/2012 c1
16Shauni Cooper
Nice! Sweet and soooo true! Like it a lot! Keep writing! You are doing very well! :)
-Shauni

Nice! Sweet and soooo true! Like it a lot! Keep writing! You are doing very well! :)
-Shauni