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4/17/2012 c3 Nabucco
Hooray! New chapter! I love this story, and I love the world you created. As barren as a desert is, there's always a richness in the setting if you can coax it out, no? :) Can't wait to read what happens next!
P.S.
When will you be able to update My Grim Reaper? I love that story as well! 3
Hooray! New chapter! I love this story, and I love the world you created. As barren as a desert is, there's always a richness in the setting if you can coax it out, no? :) Can't wait to read what happens next!
P.S.
When will you be able to update My Grim Reaper? I love that story as well! 3
3/26/2012 c1 
8Silvera Starling
Very good story! Lots of action and suspense. But I didn't like how the description of the market seemed to suddenly cut into the action sequence. It felt sudden and ruined the flow of the story.
Other than that, good job! Keep up the good work!
8Silvera StarlingVery good story! Lots of action and suspense. But I didn't like how the description of the market seemed to suddenly cut into the action sequence. It felt sudden and ruined the flow of the story.
Other than that, good job! Keep up the good work!