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4/25/2012 c1 Getuie
The comparisons are well thought out and the image is awesome... well done
4/25/2012 c1 suzieque2
Cool, a neat perspective.
4/25/2012 c1 marinawings
dang, this is really good. i quite agree with you, too. i like how you explain heaven as everything we love on earth, only much much greater and bigger and with God.
4/25/2012 c2 Getuie
"The longest horror, fiercest cry,

The bleakest sorrow, deepest sigh,

A life of pain I’d not deny,

The cruellest death I’d not defy."

Wow... THIS is amazing! For that... it just shows Jesus' sacrifice to me. It shows the longings of my own heart. It shows the longings of yours. Masterful. Truly, truly masterful.
4/25/2012 c2 Wasted Postage
This is a beautiful poem for sure. I think the most passionate lines are:

"The longest horror, fiercest cry,

The bleakest sorrow, deepest sigh."

~*~AbunaiChikara
4/25/2012 c2 KimHua
Our eyes meet



indestructible now



the bond of friendship between us



entwined with a knowledge



transcending speech



indubitable now



a future of forever before us



in the arms of the greatest love



This was my favourite bit - for some reason it just stood out... I got a real sense of the incredible power of the eternal life that is ours in Christ. :-) I really liked the rhymes on the final stanza too.

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